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Flash Fiction: Worth My Weight in Gold

WEBook.com is having another mini-contest, where entrants submit a 100 word paragraph written from the point of view of an inanimate household object. Here’s mine:

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Worth My Weight in Gold

Here I sit, minding my own business, when a sudden squeeze warns me that my world is about to be turned upside down again. Three times a day it happens, without so much as a word of thanks. My partner, Piper Nigrum, thinks he understands, but at least he stays upright. It’s not the same at all. Yesterday, someone actually dropped me. I was lucky nothing broke. I’m still feeling a little shaken. Piper says that he feels needed, and likes the daily grind, but the last thing that I ever want to hear again is, “Please pass the salt.”

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The Cat’s Meow

There is a mini contest over at WEBook.com right now, the prize to which is that the winner gets to enter their PagetoFame Contest for free. Normally, I wouldn’t be too interested, but the catch is that you have to write a 500-word story using only one-syllable words. How could I resist?

Here is my entry:

 

The Gift

 

“You want me to leave?”

“Yes.”

“Fine.” Ed stalked out.

“The door!” Liz called.

He slammed it shut and stormed down the stairs to the street. She heard his car start as she dropped to the couch and leaned her head on the black wool throw. Pained, she closed her eyes. What must he think?

A meow came from the box. She checked the front door to make sure it had latched, and then let the cat roam the room. It had been in that box since last night, for Pete’s sake! How could Ed think that was fine? He sneezed when it was loose, but it was not good to keep it in there like that. What if it pooped? She got up and brought the tray back in from the porch. The cat ran in and did its job. Good thing she’d thought of that!

The phone rang. Liz picked it up and looked at the screen. It was the pound.

“Yes?”

“Miss Peck, I’ve got good news and bad news.”

“Well?”

“I talked to my boss. He said we can take the cat back, but I can’t give you your dough.”

“Why not?” she cried. That care kit she’d had to buy when she chose the stray had not been cheap. “She has not been fixed yet. Why can’t I get that back, at least?”

“You signed the form that said you knew we don’t let folks take strays as gifts. Some folks don’t want a pet like you’d think, and they end up right back at the pound, or worse. It’s hard on the pet. That’s why we make folks sign the form. You broke the rules, so no cash back.”

“Fine. How long will you be there?” she looked at her watch.

“We close at noon.”

“I’ll be there by ten.”

“Thanks, Miss Peck. We’ll see you soon.”

That was that. Liz shook her head. She still did not know why Ed had not told her that he and cats were such a bad mix. He said how much he liked them all the time. She had not known that there was a cause for his lack of one as a pet. She’d thought it was such a great choice for his gift.

“Come on, cat,” she said, and put it back in the box. Its fur was soft, and it was so cute. Liz was sad.

The phone rang once more. It was Ed.

“Hi,” she said. “How’s your nose?”

“Fine, now,” said Ed. “Um, I was rude. The cat was a great gift. I just can’t stand to sneeze all the time!”

“You never said… “ Liz paused. “Please don’t think that it was a joke. I just did not know! You say you like cats so much.”

“I know,” said Ed. “I don’t blame you. I don’t know why I did not tell you. “

“They pound said they’d take it back.”

“Great!” said Ed.

Liz grinned. “Yes.”

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Line in the Sand

Everyone who has ever gone to elementary school has done the art project where the teacher draws a line on a piece of paper and the student turns it into a picture. 

Some students start drawing immediately, others stare at the paper and agonize over what to do. Some of the pictures are so well executed that the original line needs to be pointed out, others look like a dinosaur doing a somersault into a stack of pancakes. Some children manage to draw what they always draw, a few take that line places that even the art teacher wouldn’t have thought of.

That line is a prompt, an idea that inspires one to create something larger, more developed than the original idea. In writing, prompts are generally ideas that come to us at random times in everyday life. But sometimes, there is a contest that starts with a writing prompt.

Like this one!

I am officially hosting a flash fiction contest (500-1000 words), any genre, in which all entrants will start their story with the same line. Where you take that prompt is up to you, but the submission that pleases me the most will win either a $10 e-giftcard from Amazon.com, or a hardcover edition of the children’s book, Harold and the Purple Crayon, by Crockett Johnson* (winner’s choice). The winner will also have their story “published” in the Layinda’s Blog post of Monday, March 8, 2010, as well as a link to his/her blog, if there is one. (Keep the salivating to a minimum, please.)

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Official Rules:

1. Entries need to be posted by Friday, March 5, 2010, 11:59 P.M., Eastern Standard Time, in the Line in the Sand comments on Layinda’s Blog (authors will retain all rights to their work).

2. Each entry needs to be 500-1000 words in length, any genre, but no smut, please.

3. THE STORY MUST START WITH THE PROMPT.

4. Only one submission per author.

5. To qualify, entrants must mention the url to my blog:

 https://layinda.wordpress.com/

either on their blog or in a comment on someone else’s blog, and include the url to where that mention is posted in the same comment as their entry to this contest.

6. The contest winner’s name and winning story will be posted in this blog on Monday, March 8, 2010. Arrangements will be made at that time as to logistics regarding the prize.

Any questions? Post those, too.

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HERE IS THE PROMPT:

She watched the boat sail away.

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* See my previous blog post, Oldies but Goodies: Great Books for First Graders.


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