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Everyone’s a Critic

Yesterday, I was researching a Dickens passage for another post I’m working on, and went to Amazon.com to see if I could “search inside this book” for Great Expectations. Much to my amusement, I noticed that out of 260 reviews, it had only received four (out of five) stars.

Great Expectations is a classic, assigned to generations of high school students on the strength of its literary merit. Dickens’ thirteenth novel, it was first published in 1860 as a newspaper serial. The hardcover edition was released in July of 1861, and enjoyed immense popularity at home and abroad. 149 years later, it has never gone out of print, and has been adapted for stage and screen nineteen times.

Of its Amazon reviewers, 129 gave it five stars, 61 four stars, 25 three stars, 18 two stars, and 27 one star. Curious as to the calibre of the one star ratings, I clicked on the first, entitled, “One of the Worst Books I Have Ever Read.”

Interestingly, the critic suggests that he/she might have liked the story, had it not been for the poor quality of the writing — specifically, Dickens’ irrelevant descriptions of trees and rivers. As a result of this and other intellectual tedium, the writer confesses to not actually having finished the book, convinced (although claiming to have seen the movie) that nothing worthwhile would take place. If fact, the first chapter was deemed to be so terrible that the critic recommends no one even attempt to read it. (3 out of 9 people found this review helpful.)

The moral of this story is that no matter how well you think your manuscript is written or how clever the plot, or how many of your beta readers/critique partners think it is worthy of five stars, someone is always going to hate it.

Don’t worry – you’re in good company.

References:

Amazon.com
http://www.amazon.com/Expectations-Penguin-Classics-Charles-Dickens/product-reviews/0141439564/ref=cm_cr_pr_hist_1?ie=UTF8&showViewpoints=0&filterBy=addOneStar

Wikipedia
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Great_Expectations

Charles Dickens – Gad’s Hill Place
http://www.perryweb.com/Dickens/work_list.shtml

BBC Historic Figures
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tp://www.bbc.co.uk/history/historic_figures/dickens_charles.shtml

Penguin.com (USA)
http://us.penguingroup.com/static/rguides/us/great_expectations.html

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Friends with Freedom

I once framed a pretty card that read, “A true friend is one who overlooks your broken down gate and admires the flowers in your window.” At first glance, this seems trite, but it makes sense. It does not suggest that the friend doesn’t notice our flaws, or pretends that everything is fine and then goes off to talk about it with the neighbors. A friend recognizes our faults but looks past them to appreciate our good points.

That is how I feel about the United States. Although I am frequently dismayed by decisions made at all levels of government, I live in freedom. I can say and write what I think without fear of arrest (or worse). I can pass through its borders at will, travel anywhere, and live in any neighborhood that I can afford. In an emergency, I can call for the police, firemen or an ambulance and know that help will arrive within minutes. Grocery stores are bursting with food, and potable water flows out of almost every faucet. Dependable electrical current powers my lights and refrigerator, and I heat my home in the winter with the flick of a switch. If I can’t afford it, there are programs that will provide assistance. When I’m dissatisfied with something, I can contact my councilman, congressman, senator and even the president, and if the results are unsatisfactory, I can vote them out of office.

People in the United States do not crouch half-naked on street corners begging for food. Heavily armed soldiers are not a part of daily life, and abandoned orphans don’t sleep in the gutters. Things are not perfect, and no one would deny that there are flaws in the system, but they are outweighed by the positives that make our country what it is.

A friend sees our gate dragging in the grass, but looks past it to appreciate the beauty of our yard. Sometimes, they’ll even try to help fix things.

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And the Award Goes to…

I am pleased to announce that I was recently given a blogging award by my AQ pal/blogging buddy, Jemi Fraser, of Just Jemi.

Traditionally, when one receives an award like this, he/she graciously passes it along to someone else with no strings attached, but The Versatile Blogger Award comes with some conditions, listed below. If you are one of the recipients, please know that there is no pressure to accept it – just know that I enjoy visiting your blog.

Conditions:
1. Thank the folks and link to them
2. Share 7 things about myself
3. Pass along to 15 bloggers (and link to them)
4. Comment on their blogs to tell them of the award

1.) Thank the Folks and Link to Them:

Thank you, Jemi, for awarding The Versatile Blogger Award to me. It is festive, and I like the color.

2.) Share Seven Things About Myself:

1. I was a computer graphics artist before I went back to school to pick up my teaching degree.

2. I like to paint (on canvas, not walls) (well, walls too, actually).

3. I enjoy shopping for office supplies.

4. I LOVE the Lindt dark chocolate bars with chunks of salt in them.

5. I am a Mac (vs. PC) person, and am embarrassingly uninhibited about trying to convert people.

6. I like to play Scrabble on Facebook.

7. I have a pair of gold wedge sandals I bought in May that are still sitting in the box. I foresee no occasions at which I envision myself wearing them, but they are so cute that I’m finding it hard to take them back to the store.

3. Pass Along to 15 Other Bloggers and Link to Them:
(In alphabetical order)

CalistaTaylor – A Steampunk Reverie

Charlie Eve – Kids Book Junky

Chris Morgan – Perkisize Minds

Jean Oram (dot.com)

Lisa and Lisa Write a Book
(and yes, I’m counting  both of them — do you know how hard it is to think of 15 other bloggers who know you well enough that they won’t wonder why you’re bestowing an award on them?)

Lisa Shiroff – It’slisa’s Blog

MarcyKate Connolly

Matt Sinclair – Elephant’s Bookshelf

Melanie S. – Breaking In

RC Lewis – Crossing the Helix

R.K. Lewis – Needle City

SHAWNAWKS – The Forever Blog

Ty Roth – VEHICLE

Yvonne Osborne – The Organic Writer

4.) Comment on Their Blogs to Tell Them of the Award:

You’ll just have to trust me on this one, or visit their blogs to verify.

Thanks again, Jemi! 🙂

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Where the Boys Are

Ty Roth wrote a blog post yesterday about the lack of YA “boy books” and male authors who write them. I started to write a comment, but it got so long that I’ve turned it into a post.

There was a time when a lot of books for boys were being published. I know this, because when I was young, my big brother’s room was closer than the local library and I was lazy, so I used to raid his bookcase.  I was rewarded with finds like My Side of the Mountain, Gull Number 737, The Mad Scientists Club, and a lot of other good “boy books” that were popular those days.

At school, the books we had to read were also “boy books” (Shane, The Call of the Wild, Johnny Tremain, etc.). When we girls complained, the teachers would say it was because girls would read “boy books” but boys didn’t like “girl books.” I knew this to be true from personal experience, and when the trend continued in high school with A Separate Peace, The Great Gatsby and The Old Man and the Sea, I didn’t think too much about it. The books were good, and if I needed a “girl book” fix, I could just go to the library.

Times have changed. My going-into-sixth-grade son has had to read Caddie Woodlawn, Sarah Plain and Tall, Alice in Wonderland, and a host of other “girl books” at school. Consequently, he has become so turned off by what he perceives as fiction that I’ve had to bribe him with computer time to get him to read it at all. When I take him to the library, there are virtually no good modern “boy books,” and all but the classics have been sold off at library sales, so he’s been borrowing Jules Verne.

I’ve had the gut feeling that if he just read the right book, he would see that reading can be fun as well as informative. After a lot of thought, and one failed attempt with From the Mixed-Up Files of Mrs. Basil E. Frankweiler (another “girl book”), I have finally hooked him with one of the titles from my brother’s bookcase, The Wonderful Flight to the Mushroom Planet. He read it on his own, and actually asked me if I would buy the sequel for him.

I suspect that the well-meaning movement to empower girls in the 1980’s and 90’s spawned an inadvertent backlash against boy titles as the girls of my generation became agents, editors and teachers. It’s nice that girls are able to read things in school now that interest them, but the boys should at least be able to find something that they like at the library.

Gull Number 737My Side of the Mountain

The Mad Scientists' Club (Mad Scientist Club)Wonderful Flight To the Mushroom Planet

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Hold the Pickles, Hold the Lettuce…

Fast food restaurants are famous for doing market research to pinpoint their customers’ needs, but what teen consumers are looking for in a novel is sometimes obscured by assumptions on the part of Young Adult writers.

Most authors know that teenagers like to read books about kids who are a few years older than themselves, and that girls will read “boy books,” but boys don’t usually like to read “girl books” (at least in public). Beyond that, many writers seem to think that if their protagonist is a young adult, the manuscript qualifies as YA.

In fact, there are numerous aspects to consider when penning a developmentally appropriate novel. Teens usually enjoy works in which they can identify with the protagonist, but in situations that are out of the ordinary. They like to see how a character tackles a problem, and then reflect on what they might have done in a similar situation. Coming-of-age stories are always popular, as are stories where teens somehow best the adults, or prove themselves through adversity, or fight and win an underdog cause, or find out that something they’d been led to believe isn’t true. Good vs. evil and the suspense of a character making the “right” choice instead of the “wrong” one seems to hold a particular fascination.

“Young Adult” is currently defined by the American Library Association as ranging in age from 10-25. Many writers informally classify their work as “Young YA” or “Mature YA,” because of the disparity in emotional development within that age group.* Ignoring this aspect of the genre can actually be detrimental to the reader. One of my sisters, a pediatric nurse, recently attended a lecture given by a psychologist who said it is not uncommon for teens to experience intense anxiety and other problems because of reading material that they aren’t emotionally ready for.**

There’s a lot to think about when authoring content for that diverse group, and writers need to make sure that their product is suitable for the target market. Fast food chains are coming under fire for providing what kids want at the expense of what is healthful. No one expects them to serve broccoli, but with a little creativity, they should be able to come up with something nourishing that also satisfies the palate.

*See my previous post, “Considering Asychronous Development in Book Selection.”

**Victoria Mixon just blogged about this topic on June 15th, and it’s worth a read.

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Oldies but Goodies: Great Books for High School Students

It’s been awhile since I’ve posted an Oldies but Goodies, so here’s one for high school students.

Several of these books are required reading, but it’s surprising how much more enjoyable they are when just read for fun. Most are available at libraries and Amazon.com, some are even on Kindle, all are good. One of them might not be equally enjoyed by both sexes, but frankly, my dear, I don’t give a damn. 😉

A Separate Peace
by John Knowles

A Separate Peace

A Walk Across America
by Peter Jenkins

A Walk Across America

Fahrenheit 451
by Ray Bradbury

Fahrenheit 451

The Three Musketeers
by Alexandre Dumas

The Three Musketeers (Wordsworth Classics)

Gone With the Wind
by Margaret Mitchell

Gone with the Wind

The Great Gatsby
by F. Scott Fitzgerald

The Great Gatsby

To Kill a Mockingbird
by Harper Lee
To Kill a Mockingbird (Harper Perennial Modern Classics)

The Chronicles of Narnia Series
by C.S. Lewis
(These seem like entirely different books when read at the high school level)

Watership Down
by Richard Adams

Watership Down: A Novel

The Best Short Stories of O. Henry
Edited by Bennett Cerf

The Best Short Stories of O. Henry (Modern Library)

All Creatures Great and Small
by James Herriot

All Creatures Great and Small

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Take the Hint

I used to have a boss who felt that the universe gave him messages about his life. He was constantly saying things like, “I’ve run into three people lately who have problems with alcohol. I think that the universe is trying to tell me something.” He would then lay off drinking for a week or two, until the universe told him to do something different.

If I were him, I would think that the universe is trying to tell ME something right now.

My manuscript, Jim and Jack, was originally literary fiction, but thanks to a lot of online advice, I have reluctantly morphed it into something more commercial. Although the story is definitely more streamlined, it is no longer the relaxing summer’s day that it was, and I don’t think that it’s as good in many ways. A few things have improved, such as the action starting earlier, but overall, it sounds just like everybody else’s “voice” these days. This has bothered me so much that I’ve even stopped querying, paralyzed about which version to send if I get another request.

Until this week. My author-hero Ty Roth posted about this very topic. So did literary agent Rachelle Gardner. Victoria Mixon had a superb (and I NEVER use that word) post about young adult literature and how all of the edgy/disturbing YA stuff isn’t healthy for kids, and when I left a comment, she replied with, “Layinda, aim for your star. Forget the nay-sayers. Nobody knows what’s going to sell, only that trends are started by people with the guts to go where no one else is going. “We are the makers of manners, Kate.”—Henry V

Now, I don’t think that the universe tells anybody anything, but these posts have resonated with me, and my mind is made up. I am going back to the original version, and I will let the professionals decide whether my manuscript is any good or not. From what I understand, there are always rewrites anyway. 

If you missed any of these excellent posts, here are the links:

Ty Roth:
http://tyroth.wordpress.com/2010/06/17/the-secret-to-my-success/

Rachelle Gardner:
http://cba-ramblings.blogspot.com/2010/06/write-from-your-heart-or-follow-trends.html

Victoria Mixon: http://www.victoriamixon.com/advice/2010/06/14/honestly-or-sensationally-addressing-ya-taboos/comment-page-1/#comment-143

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Topping the Charts

I found myself idly wondering this morning what the most popular book of all time was. I did a Google search, and Soyouwanna.com listed the ten most popular, so I checked it out. They freely admit that their stats are only on books with available sales figures, but their list still provides a general idea of what folks have preferred. Here it is:*

10.In His Steps: What Would Jesus Do?In His Steps: “What Would Jesus Do?”
Author: Rev. Charles Monroe Sheldon
Copies sold: 28,500,000

9. Go to "Valley of the Dolls" page Valley of the Dolls
Author: Jacqueline Susann
Copies sold: 30,000,000

8. Go to "Dr. Spock's Baby and Child Care: 8th Edition" page The Common Sense Book of Baby and Child Care
Author: Dr. Benjamin Spock
Copies sold: 39,200,000

7. Thumbnail for World Almanac and... The World Almanac
Author: Who knows?
Copies sold: 40,000,000

6. Go to "A Message to Garcia: And Other Essential Writings on Success" page A Message to Garcia
Author: Elbert Hubbard
Copies sold: 40-50,000,000

5. Go to "McGuffey's Eclectic Readers/Boxed" page The McGuffey Readers
Author: William Holmes McGuffey
Copies sold: 60,000,000

4. Go to "Guinness World Records 2010: Thousands of new records in The Book of the Decade!" page The Guinness Book of Records
Author: Who knows?
Copies sold: 81,000,000

3. The American spelling book: containing the rudiments of the English language for the use of schools in the United StatesAmerican Spelling Book
Author: Noah Webster
Copies sold: 100,000,000

2. Go to "Quotations From Chairman Mao Tse-Tung" page Quotations from the Works of Mao Tse-tung
Author: Mao Tse-tung
Copies sold: 800,000,000

1. The Holy Bible King James Version: King James VersionThe Bible
Author: God
Copies sold: 6,000,000,000

What I find interesting is that only one of the books would be categorized as fiction.** Reference books, religious works, “how to” manuals and dogma all outrank the imagination for supplying a good read. That Valley of the Dolls must be some book!

*To see the complete annotation, go to their website.

**For those of you who — like me — have never heard of A Message to Garcia, it is a motivational true story.

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I Really Should Be Working…

I have posted previously about the benefits of procrastinating. It allows the subconscious to have some important incubation time, helps clear out the mental cobwebs, and diffuses inner conflict on days when writing is more of a struggle than a joy.

In the spirit of providing tools for avoiding writer’s block, I have annotated a few good, free websites that are a wonderful way to change gears while scoring some brownie points with the inner child. 

braingle.com
This site is a storehouse of brain teasers and mental challenges to delight even the most self-disciplined of writers. 

Goodhousekeeping.com
You might be happy to just read the articles on this website, but if you go to the “games” section, you will be even happier. Spliterature and Mah Jong Dimensions are two of my favorites. Note: you have to scroll to the bottom of the home page to find the correct tab.

TestQ.com
Lots of fun and informative tests to take, that range from measuring your I.Q. to determining what your favorite color says about you. This site is a pleasant way to pass the time when you really should be researching the proper way to write a query letter. 

Facebook.com
I guess I don’t really need to describe this one, but I can highly recommend the Scrabble Beta game.

Lego.com
It’s not just for kids anymore. There are many terrific games on this website (category: Play) that will engage even the mature writer. My favorite is Junkbot, where you have to guide a lego robot across a series of blocks that gets more challenging with every level.

Note: A good trick to keep the goofing-off to a manageable level is to set a timer. When the buzzer goes off, get back to work.


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Monday Author Series – Gone but Not Forgotten: Marguerite Henry

Marguerite Henry

Marguerite Breithaupt Henry was born on April 13, 1902, in Wisconsin. When she was eight years old, she fell victim to rheumatic fever and was an invalid for several years. Confined to bed, there wasn’t much to do in those days but read and write, and so that’s what she did. At age eleven, she entered one of her stories in a magazine contest and won, resulting in her first publication. After fully recuperating, she went back to school and continued on to college, where she received a degree to teach English.

After she married Sydney Crocker Henry in 1923, she started submitting some of her stories to magazines. After some success, she began to write animal books for children, collaborating with illustrator Wesley Dennis on several of her works. Their first endeavor was Justin Morgan Had a Horse, which won a Newbury Honor. Most of her books were about horses, which Dennis excelled at depicting.

Known for her extensive research and the historical accuracy of her stories, her books were very popular with children, and many are still in print. The most famous of her fifty-nine works were, Justin Morgan Had a HorseBrighty of the Grand Canyon, Misty of Chincoteague, Stormy, Misty’s Foal, King of the Wind, and Album of Horses, earning her two Newbury Honors and a Newbury Medal, as well as several other distinguished awards. 

After a long and fulfilling career, she died on November 26, 1997, at age 95.

Justin Morgan Had a Horse

Misty of Chincoteague
 
Brighty: Of the Grand Canyon (Marguerite Henry Horseshoe Library)
King of the Wind: The Story of the Godolphin Arabian
 
Album of Horses

 

Sources: 

Wikipedia.com
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marguerite_Henry

Google Images
http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://favoritechildrensbooks.info/wp-content/uploads/2008/09/margueritehenry.jpg&imgrefurl=http://favoritechildrensbooks.info/&usg=__avHwX6WTwKM6Pw-tUYWqKHa3TtQ=&h=200&w=170&sz=7&hl=en&start=3&sig2=qSPJ7gFnG712aJkF6Bofpw&um=1&itbs=1&tbnid=e2mvKDZQJN_HzM:&tbnh=104&tbnw=88&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dmarguerite%2Bhenry%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26client%3Dsafari%26sa%3DX%26rls%3Den-us%26tbs%3Disch:1&ei=hz8NTL6NIYH6lweGlJGYDg 

Greenville Public Library
http://www.yourlibrary.ws/childrens_webpage/j-author42001.html

Answers.com
http://www.answers.com/topic/marguerite-henry

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