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The Roots of Genius
Ever notice anything funny about a lot of literary icons?
Fitzgerald

Steinbeck


Millay


Shelley

Thoreau
Shakespeare
Just saying.
Filed under Miscellaneous, Reading, Uncategorized, Writing
Getting Into the Mood
I have heard of many things that authors do to get themselves into the mood to write. They’ll use a special pen, listen to particular music, or eat certain foods that they feel will tempt their muse to come out and play.
I have found for myself that wearing a certain pink bathrobe seems to do the trick. I don’t know why, but when I snug into its cozy folds on Saturday mornings, I want nothing more than to sit at my laptop and write. Wearing this robe, I pounded out the first thirty pages of SECRET AGENT in one sitting, and have been struck with myriad ideas for blog posts — sometimes two or three at a time. I am actually wearing it in my avatar photo, although I cropped it closely enough that (hopefully) no one could tell.
Plum colored flowers on a fluffy ground of Pepto-Bismol pink, a clear lucite zipper pull and patch pockets with braided satin edging combine in a lightweight softness that borders on luxury. The robe happens to be two sizes too large, but it zips up the front so that I never have to retie a sash, and the mandarin collar keeps my neck toasty.
Ensconced in this billowy cocoon, only my hands need venture into the cool morning air, a steaming mug of tea nearby to warm them if necessary. With the cares of the week behind me, no demands other than a toppled pile of laundry and the white noise of my sons’ laughter as they watch cartoons, my mind is able to tune out the world and discern the quiet inklings of my muse.
What gets you ready to write?
Filed under Miscellaneous, Uncategorized, Writing
Great Book, Great Party, Great Time
Ty Roth’s debut YA novel, So Shelly, hit the shelves on Tuesday. I haven’t gotten a chance to read more than the first pages of my (pre-ordered) copy from Amazon, but if the buzz online is any indication, it will be worth the wait.
Last Easter, I had the good fortune to notice a local newspaper article about Ty’s then-recent publishing deal, and invited him to do an interview for my blog. He graciously accepted, and the result was my most-popular-to-date post, Great Guy, Great Book, Great Advice (parts 1 and 2).
Recently, Ty sent me an invitation to Friday night’s launch party for So Shelly, which I graciously accepted. (Well, graciously might be an overstatement, as it was “regrets only,” but I was really excited to be invited.)
Anyway, about the party:
First of all, never ask your eighty-year-old father for directions. The event began at seven, but I didn’t get there until about 8:10 because I got caught in a maze of darkened and somewhat bluesy side streets that Dad had forgotten to mention during the litany of underpasses and McDonalds he’d said would mark my way. After a less than informative call to him on my dying cell phone, I finally stopped at a restaurant where a kindly waitress pointed me in the right direction.
I arrived not long after Ty finished up a great speech that had lasted for about forty minutes. (This according to my husband, who had come straight from work and was waiting for me in the yacht club’s foyer the whole time.)
As I deposited my coat in the coat room, I noticed that the place was packed, the main room darkened, with dramatic music washing over the crowd in waves. In response to my raised eyebrows, my husband (let’s call him Tim) helpfully informed me that there was some form of entertainment going on.
Ty was standing just inside the doorway, but was engrossed in whatever the attraction was, so we squeezed as unobtrusively as we could into the room behind him to find a good spot to check out the action.
“Would you like some wine or something?” Tim had apparently also had time to scope out the place during his wait, knowing the exact location of both bar and buffet. I nodded and peered between the heads of the people in front of me to see what was going on.
A spotlight shone on an artist who was furiously rendering a large colored-chalk interpretation of So Shelly’s cover. Gypsum dust swirled like lake mist in the beam of light as the artist added depth and shadow to rocks and created a lighthouse out of thin air. The guests oohed and aahed as the scene morphed into a view of Shelly’s silhouette on the pier, and then special effect lighting flashed a beacon of impending doom. It really was impressive. Different gels changed the palette from light to dark, and the mood went from intense to lighthearted as images of Ty in earlier years were superimposed over it. The performance ended to hearty applause a few moments later.
Once the lights were up, people swarmed the bar and Tim pointed out a table with nearly depleted stacks of So Shelly. My copy from Amazon was safely in my purse, but I snagged two of the complimentary bookmarks before the man in charge put everything away.
After cruising the buffet, our plates loaded with assorted appetizers including teriyaki chicken kabobs, Swedish meatballs, raw veggies and dip, we found a side room with a few open tables and sat down to stuff our faces. At each of our places was a CD tied with a black ribbon, a So Shelly mix tape.

I’m not sure if the songs are significant in the book, or if the music was inspirational while Ty wrote, but the list is a good one, including classics by REM and Journey as well as more contemporary tunes by Better Than Ezra and 30 Seconds to Mars. At the event itself, there was a two piece band (that somehow sounded at times like a four piece band), and I wondered if some of their playlist might be the same. I added the disks to my purse — one for posterity, the other to listen to in the car.
As Tim enjoyed a second helping of chicken, I scouted the dessert tables and saw two cakes being served, one chocolate and one vanilla, both with white frosting. Charmed to see that each had a sugar image of the So Shelly cover on top, which had been moved away from the area being cut, I had an errant desire to roll one up and stick it into my purse along with the CDs, but maturely chose to take a photo of it, instead.
Nearby was a table overflowing with fresh fruit that surrounded a large bowl of creamy white dip, which was delicious.
Two trips were sufficient to ease my sweet tooth, and then, camera in hand, I took a few more snaps of the festivities, including a long view of Ty signing books and a shot of the chalk drawing and it’s artist, which became part of a silent auction benefitting Sandusky Artisans.
It occurred to me that my husband might be getting pretty bored sitting alone at our table, but when I returned to it, I found him engrossed in So Shelly (which is quite an endorsement, because Tim NEVER reads fiction).
A crowd of well-wishers surrounded Ty all evening, but I eventually decided to brave the line and ended up having a very pleasant conversation with a man who informed me he that he had been Ty’s principal. When I inquired if he meant when Ty was a student, or as a teacher, he replied that in a way, it was both. He’d been the principal of the school Ty attended as a youth, and then had gone on to become superintendent of the system that hired Ty out of college.
Finally, it was my turn, and Ty was just as friendly and genuine as I remembered. Signing my book, he confided that he’s not wild about that part of the job, but it can’t be because he doesn’t know what to say – mine was perfect.
Filed under Interviews, Miscellaneous, Reading, Recommended Reading, Uncategorized, Writing
Looking for Mr. Write
One night last week, I entered the “First Paragraph” blog contest that Nathan Bransford was hosting. After copying and pasting the first lines of Jim and Jack into the official comment thread, I got the message that it had been added but might take a while to show. Then I went to bed.
The contest concluded the next day, and that afternoon I checked to make sure my comment had actually gone through. As I maneuvered through the blizzard of entries to comments posted around the time mine was, I happened to read many of the competition’s paragraphs. Some were bad, some were decent, some were fashionably stark, others were the purplest of prose. Then I found mine. After reading everything else, I didn’t even think it sounded that great.
It’s one thing to know that there are millions of writer-wannabes out there, all searching for the same brass ring, but it’s quite another to wade through the slush pile and see that for oneself. Everyone thinks his or her manuscript is the next bestseller, and almost all are certain to be wrong.
I once read a study which purported that (generally) everyone thinks they are good-looking. No matter how homely a person might be, when they see themselves alone in a mirror, they can fully appreciate their own uniqueness. It’s only amongst the masses that one falls short, and the tall, dark and handsome are the ones who always seem to get the girl. However, there are many who might prefer the nice guy with the good sense of humor, if they only got to know him.
I suspect that it’s similar when submitting one’s manuscript, which is why “knowing someone” in this business can make such a difference. Like a well-meaning friend setting up a blind date, a referral affords the opportunity for agents and editors to give a manuscript some individual attention, hopefully allowing them to recognize Mr. Right. That’s why contests like NB’s are so popular – the prize of getting one’s work in front of an agent is like winning The Dating Game. Things might not work out, but at least you have a chance to strut your stuff.
Alas, I didn’t win, but here’s my first paragraph (and just a tad more), of my Half Moon Island History-Mystery, written for gifted boys aged 11-16* who enjoy books like My Side of the Mountain and A Separate Peace:
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—–Jack awakened early, the island still in slumber except for the songbirds, whose warbling kept him from rolling over and going back to sleep. Drowsy, he listened for their different voices, identifying a cardinal and then a robin. A mourning dove cooed its gentle trill, and he could hear the distant tapping of a woodpecker. A jay screeched overhead, breaking the peacefulness of the moment. Jack rolled over in the half-light to peer at his identical twin, asleep in the other bed. He was lying on his back with his mouth open, a light snore issuing with each breath.
—–“Jim!” Jack whispered. His brother remained motionless, pajama-clad legs entangled in the white cotton bedspread. With a grin, Jack reached over to the desk and tore a corner off some scrap paper.
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* Refer to Previous Post: Considering Asynchronous Development in Book Selection
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Contests Abound
It seems that lately, all kinds of contests for aspiring writers are popping up. Here are the links to three that I just found out about today:
• Former agent Nathan Bransford’s 4th Annual Stupendously Ultimate First Paragraph Challenge.
First Prize: A partial read by his agent, Catherine Drayton of Inkwell Management.
(Contest closes on Thursday at 4pm Pacific Time)
• Fiction Groupie Blog contest.
Prize: A query critique by Anita Mumm of Nelson Literary
(To be eligible, you need to comment on both Wednesday’s and Friday’s posts).
• DearEditor.com giveaway, by the author of Writing Young Adult Fiction for Dummies.
Prize: a free YA/MG edit.
(Deadline, Jan. 31st)
Good Luck!
Filed under Miscellaneous, Uncategorized, Writing
A Picture is Worth 1000 Words
I read a good book over the holidays, Pope Joan, by Donna Woolfolk Cross. My book group read it a few years ago, but I was busy at the time and only read the first few pages. I could tell it would be interesting, and always intended to get back to it, but it’s rather thick and I never seemed to have enough spare time to do it justice. This year, when winter vacation arrived, I made a point of getting it from the library.
Now, I’m not one of those writers who complains that they can no longer read a book without critiquing it. In fact, even when I pick up a book with that intent, I am so easily sucked into a story that I forget to notice anything at all unless something is poorly phrased, or there’s a typo. This time, though, after about 250 pages, I became aware of how tiny the type was. Knowing that most books these days, even historical fiction, don’t exceed 125,000 words, I started to wonder when it had been published, and stopped reading long enough to find out. 1996. I then realized why I was enjoying it so much: it had been written before the kill the adverbs/show vs. tell revolution.
Devoid of all signs of the current wisdom on how to write, there was description, and there were adverbs, adjectives and gerunds. There were words other than “said” used as dialogue tags, and it was a behemoth, over 400 pages long, even set in eight-point-type. The point of view moved like quicksilver between the characters, and there was telling mixed with showing. There was even… a cliché.
Many writers have come to think that describing a location or what characters look like robs the reader of the joy of imagining it for themselves, but I disagree. As a former graphic artist, I have a seriously visual imagination. Filling in the blanks doesn’t squelch that, it only serves as a framework for me to build upon. The mention that a character’s eyebrows are bushy doesn’t lock me into a specific image. There are a hundred ways to picture bushy brows, but if I don’t know they are bushy in the first place, I have lost my connection to the author’s vision.
There is an animated children’s show called Caillou, that depicts the action in vignettes floating on whitespace. The viewer doesn’t imagine what might be there instead, there is just nothing. I find it disconcerting, and am more distracted by how the detail stops than I would be if the artists had just added background to the picture.
When an author uses description and flushes out the nuances with adverbs and dialogue tags, it gives their story dimension, adding depth to the world that readers build in their minds. The reader becomes a part of the action, rather than seeing it as frames in a cartoon.
Many recent books do a good job following the restrictions of the current trends and offer a clean and entertaining read, but if given the choice as a reader, I’ll take the old way. Give me adverbs, give me description, give me telling. I want to be in the same room that the characters are, to see the same people they’re looking at. Tell me a great story that I can replay 1000 times in my mind. If I want minimalism, I’ll read a map.
Filed under Critical Thinking, Miscellaneous, Reading, Recommended Reading, Uncategorized, Writing
Layinda’s Blog Turns One
Yesterday was the first anniversary of Layinda’s Blog. (Just for the record, I would have come up with a snappier title, but I didn’t realize when creating it that the title is the one thing in the format that can’t be changed later.) (Unless there’s something I don’t know about, which is entirely possible.)
I have nothing but good things to say about writing a blog, and can highly recommend it. Over the course of this year, I have figured out how to insert images, how to link to other sites, and how to use “keywords” effectively. I started out posting Monday through Friday, but when real life intervened, I realized that I wrote better posts if I did them as inspired, rather than on demand. I also think that writing on a regular basis has helped me to become a better and more efficient writer. In short, I’ve grown.
Thanks to EVERYONE who has visited, and special thanks to those who have left comments. If there are any particular topics anyone would like me to address in the coming year, or if there are any things I already do that you’d like to see more of, feel free to mention that in today’s comments, and I will do my best.
At the end of 2010, WordPress sent out each blog’s statistics for the year, and I thought I’d share a few of mine (below). I suspect that they give all the new blogs a “wow” rating, but I never look a gift horse in the mouth. (Hmmm, just thought of a new idea for a post…)
Thanks again, everybody, for making Layinda’s Blog such a pleasure to produce. I couldn’t have done it without you. 🙂
Here are the stats:
Happy New Year from WordPress.com! To kick off the year, we’d like to share with you data on how your blog has been doing. Here’s a high level summary of your overall blog health:
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Blog-Health-o-Meter™
We think you did great!
Crunchy numbers
A Boeing 747-400 passenger jet can hold 416 passengers. This blog was viewed about 3,900 times in 2010. That’s about 9 full 747s.
(Author’s Note: The official anniversary number was 3997 – I’d hoped it would hit 4000 in time for the big day, but that was close enough for me! 😉 )
In 2010, you wrote 133 new posts, not bad for the first year! You uploaded 7pictures, taking up a total of 7mb.
Your busiest day of the year was June 1st with76 views. The most popular post that day wasGreat Guy, Great Book, Great Advice: Part 1.
Where did they come from?
The top referring sites in 2010 were twitter.com,facebook.com, blogger.com,jemifraser.blogspot.com, andcatwoods.wordpress.com.
Some visitors came searching, mostly forsmiling hurts, books for young advanced readers, blogs for parents of advanced readers, age appropriate book lists, and ty roth author.
Attractions in 2010
These are the posts and pages that got the most views in 2010. You can see all of the year’s most-viewed posts and pages in your Site Stats.
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Great Guy, Great Book, Great Advice: Part 1April 2010
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Young Advanced Readers: An Age Appropriate Book List for Puzzled ParentsApril 2010
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About
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Ghost from the Past: Elements of the Modern NovelMay 2010
4 comments
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To Critique or Not to CritiqueApril 2010
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Nancy Who? *
When I was in fifth grade, I loved Nancy Drew. She was the classic upper-middle-grade-girl heroine: high-school-aged, pretty and smart, with deductive powers that rivaled Sherlock Holmes. The fact that she had not one, but two, best friends, a handsome college-age boyfriend, and drove her own car didn’t hurt, either. I wanted to be Nancy Drew when I got older.
Needless to say, that didn’t come to pass. What did come to pass was that my beloved grandmother saw an ad for a subscription to the Nancy Drew Book Club and signed me up to receive two lavender colored double-volume hardbacks of classic Nancy Drew stories, once a month. I was in heaven, ensconced in the backseat with George Fayne and Bess Marvin as Nancy navigated mystery after mystery in her blue convertible. Although I eventually wised-up to the formulaic style and started to wish that Ned Nickerson would at least hold Nancy’s hand, I enjoyed the series well into middle school.
In seventh grade, whether because the special printing abruptly ended its run, or the company decided that twelve- to thirteen-year-old girls would no longer be interested in G-rated fare, the books were unexpectedly replaced with single volumes by an author I’d never even heard of, Betty Cavanna.
After working my way through the five stages of grief, I eyed the first installment with suspicion. A nice looking hardback, it had a montage of blue-green and pink images that included a prim looking Asian teenager, Jenny Kimura. Feeling slightly disloyal, I opened it up and started to read.
Wow! I had never read a book like that before. This teenaged girl was much more complex than Nancy or her friends, with internal thoughts and an active interest in boys. She was emotional, and had problems just like any other teenager. Jenny’s mother was Japanese, but her father wasn’t, and her maternal grandparents had never accepted the marriage. Jenny didn’t even know them, but for some reason, they invited her to spend the summer there. It was my first taste of YA.
When the next book arrived, I shamelessly devoured it. Then came Mystery of the Emerald Buddha, Mystery on Safari, Ruffles and Drums, Spice Island Mystery, and others. I followed teen protagonists to Brazil, Africa, Thailand, New York City, and Revolutionary War era Concord. Their boyfriends held hands with them — and kissed them, too — as the girls considered career choices, resolved interpersonal issues, and came to mature decisions that usually involved self-denial of some sort. All of the books involved romance, but they were really about coming-of-age moments and seeing past the world’s prejudices to find what truly matters.
Occasionally, I thought it odd that Grandma was sponsoring these (innocently) romantic adventure stories, but it wasn’t until the books stopped coming that I found out she just hadn’t noticed the switch when paying the bills. Born in the days of the Gibson Girl, she told me that she didn’t think the new books were appropriate for someone my age to read.
Fortunately, they didn’t mind at the library…
These days, the Nancy Drew series is still in print, but Betty Cavanna’s books are only obtainable through other sellers on Amazon, and most are former library copies (which means you won’t be finding them there, either). But, if you know a middle-school girl who finds the current YA fodder a little too intense, it’s worth the search.
* My apologies to subscribers – I accidentally hit the “publish” button rather than the “save draft” button (an irrevocable action) before I was finished writing this post. What you received in your email notification was that version, not the final seen here. 😦
Filed under Book Reviews, Miscellaneous, Reading, Recommended Reading, Uncategorized
Resolving to be Resolute
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New Year’s resolutions are highly controversial. Some people love to make them, while others avoid them like the swine flu.
I’ve heard that having specific goals helps one to actually keep them. “I will lose ten pounds” is better than “I need to lose some weight.” Writing them down is supposed to help, too. And you can’t expect success if you make resolutions that involve things beyond your control, like,“I will get published this year.” (Unless, of course, your plan is to self publish.)
I usually resolve to do a few things that I’m likely to do anyway, but am largely unaware of my success or failure because I tend to forget about them. This year, I’m writing them down, from easiest to hardest:
1. I resolve to exercise more. There, I just did a sit-up. Mission accomplished.
2. I resolve to turn off TweetDeck while I write to limit distractions and maximize output.
3. I resolve to write for at least 30 minutes every day whether I feel like it or not.
I’ll let you know.
Have a happy New Year, and I hope all of your resolutions come true.
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