Memorial Day usually makes us think of loved ones whom we’ve lost in service to our country, but the United States rests on the bones of many from previous generations who have no one left to mourn. Today’s Best of the Blog is dedicated to Howard Brewer, 1898-1918.
Category Archives: Critical Thinking
Best of the Blog IV: The Ultimate Sacrifice
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Best of the Blog II: Considering Asynchronous Development in Book Selection
Here’s another installment of Best of the Blog. I’ll be back on June sixth with something new. See you then…
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Best of the Blog I: In Defense of the Adverb
Although life should slow down after June 6th, the time I usually devote to the blog has been extremely limited lately. Rather than let it lie fallow, I have decided to post a few Best-of-the-Blog links. Enjoy.
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Cover Up: New Looks for Old Books
Ironically, after I rhapsodized about my Christmastime search for the perfect book, my younger son wasn’t as wild about Ribsy as I had hoped. At first.
When I’d found it at the bookstore, I was dismayed that the cover had been updated, but had no idea that it would impact my son. The dynamic black and white image of Ribsy on a yellow ground was replaced at some point by a generic short hair, and had I been wandering the bookstore aimlessly, I would not even have picked it up. Why, I wondered, would they replace the original Ribsy: large, lanky, and shedding exactly the sort of personality that would end up riding away in the wrong car?
Ribsy is not the only victim. Most of Beverly Cleary’s book covers have been updated, as have Elizabeth Enright’s, Edward Eager’s, Madeleine L’Engle’s and many others. Sometimes, the illustrators don’t even seem acquainted with the characters they’re trying to portray. It is easy to imagine an art director saying, “Hey, we need a scruffy dog on the cover. Go with red or blue — yellow’s been done.”
Even when the new covers aren’t bad, it would be a stretch to say they are an improvement. Consider All of a Kind Family, by Sydney Taylor,
Marguerite Henry’s Brighty of the Grand Canyon,

or Elizabeth George Speare’s The Witch of Blackbird Pond.
I am a firm believer in, “if it ain’t broke, don’t fix it.” If the original cover attracted readers in the first place, why mess with success?
Interestingly, even when covers are changed, inside illustrations frequently remain the same, such as Jean Merrill’s The Toothpaste Millionaire, 

and Elizabeth Enright’s The Saturdays.
One wonders about the point of having an updated cover, especially when it is labeled, “With pictures by the original illustrator.”
Thankfully, not all old titles have lost their looks. The recently reprinted Happy Hollisters 
books have maintained their original covers and illustrations, and the classic Nancy Drew series (although updated from the 1940s) has remained unchanged for decades.
On some level, even the publishers must think that newer doesn’t necessarily mean better. For the 100th anniversary edition of Anne of Green Gables, Putnam went with the original cover,

as did Harcourt for the 50th anniversary of Edward Eager’s Half Magic.

Yearling seems to have realized that The Wolves of Willoughby Chase got it right the first time,
and Goodnight Moon‘s original cover (1947) is still going strong.
The whole concept of updating could ultimately prove to be a slippery slope. Until the recent Twain tom-foolery, no one had considered changing the text, but now, who knows?
Perhaps soon, other old favorites will have not only language, but plot points updated to jibe with the newest generation of readers. Meg Murray might start to “disrespect” Mrs. Whatsit, whilst Charles Wallace sits staring at his gaming system instead of a giant pulsing brain.
After several attempts to get my son to read Ribsy, it occurred to me that perhaps he was trying to tell a book by its cover. “Let me show you what Ribsy really looks like,” I said as I went online to show him the original. “Do you want to read it now?”
“Yes! He looks like a fun pup.” He ran to his room to get it, then shouted down the stairs, “Why didn’t you buy me THAT book?”
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Looking for Mr. Write
One night last week, I entered the “First Paragraph” blog contest that Nathan Bransford was hosting. After copying and pasting the first lines of Jim and Jack into the official comment thread, I got the message that it had been added but might take a while to show. Then I went to bed.
The contest concluded the next day, and that afternoon I checked to make sure my comment had actually gone through. As I maneuvered through the blizzard of entries to comments posted around the time mine was, I happened to read many of the competition’s paragraphs. Some were bad, some were decent, some were fashionably stark, others were the purplest of prose. Then I found mine. After reading everything else, I didn’t even think it sounded that great.
It’s one thing to know that there are millions of writer-wannabes out there, all searching for the same brass ring, but it’s quite another to wade through the slush pile and see that for oneself. Everyone thinks his or her manuscript is the next bestseller, and almost all are certain to be wrong.
I once read a study which purported that (generally) everyone thinks they are good-looking. No matter how homely a person might be, when they see themselves alone in a mirror, they can fully appreciate their own uniqueness. It’s only amongst the masses that one falls short, and the tall, dark and handsome are the ones who always seem to get the girl. However, there are many who might prefer the nice guy with the good sense of humor, if they only got to know him.
I suspect that it’s similar when submitting one’s manuscript, which is why “knowing someone” in this business can make such a difference. Like a well-meaning friend setting up a blind date, a referral affords the opportunity for agents and editors to give a manuscript some individual attention, hopefully allowing them to recognize Mr. Right. That’s why contests like NB’s are so popular – the prize of getting one’s work in front of an agent is like winning The Dating Game. Things might not work out, but at least you have a chance to strut your stuff.
Alas, I didn’t win, but here’s my first paragraph (and just a tad more), of my Half Moon Island History-Mystery, written for gifted boys aged 11-16* who enjoy books like My Side of the Mountain and A Separate Peace:
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—–Jack awakened early, the island still in slumber except for the songbirds, whose warbling kept him from rolling over and going back to sleep. Drowsy, he listened for their different voices, identifying a cardinal and then a robin. A mourning dove cooed its gentle trill, and he could hear the distant tapping of a woodpecker. A jay screeched overhead, breaking the peacefulness of the moment. Jack rolled over in the half-light to peer at his identical twin, asleep in the other bed. He was lying on his back with his mouth open, a light snore issuing with each breath.
—–“Jim!” Jack whispered. His brother remained motionless, pajama-clad legs entangled in the white cotton bedspread. With a grin, Jack reached over to the desk and tore a corner off some scrap paper.
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* Refer to Previous Post: Considering Asynchronous Development in Book Selection
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A Picture is Worth 1000 Words
I read a good book over the holidays, Pope Joan, by Donna Woolfolk Cross. My book group read it a few years ago, but I was busy at the time and only read the first few pages. I could tell it would be interesting, and always intended to get back to it, but it’s rather thick and I never seemed to have enough spare time to do it justice. This year, when winter vacation arrived, I made a point of getting it from the library.
Now, I’m not one of those writers who complains that they can no longer read a book without critiquing it. In fact, even when I pick up a book with that intent, I am so easily sucked into a story that I forget to notice anything at all unless something is poorly phrased, or there’s a typo. This time, though, after about 250 pages, I became aware of how tiny the type was. Knowing that most books these days, even historical fiction, don’t exceed 125,000 words, I started to wonder when it had been published, and stopped reading long enough to find out. 1996. I then realized why I was enjoying it so much: it had been written before the kill the adverbs/show vs. tell revolution.
Devoid of all signs of the current wisdom on how to write, there was description, and there were adverbs, adjectives and gerunds. There were words other than “said” used as dialogue tags, and it was a behemoth, over 400 pages long, even set in eight-point-type. The point of view moved like quicksilver between the characters, and there was telling mixed with showing. There was even… a cliché.
Many writers have come to think that describing a location or what characters look like robs the reader of the joy of imagining it for themselves, but I disagree. As a former graphic artist, I have a seriously visual imagination. Filling in the blanks doesn’t squelch that, it only serves as a framework for me to build upon. The mention that a character’s eyebrows are bushy doesn’t lock me into a specific image. There are a hundred ways to picture bushy brows, but if I don’t know they are bushy in the first place, I have lost my connection to the author’s vision.
There is an animated children’s show called Caillou, that depicts the action in vignettes floating on whitespace. The viewer doesn’t imagine what might be there instead, there is just nothing. I find it disconcerting, and am more distracted by how the detail stops than I would be if the artists had just added background to the picture.
When an author uses description and flushes out the nuances with adverbs and dialogue tags, it gives their story dimension, adding depth to the world that readers build in their minds. The reader becomes a part of the action, rather than seeing it as frames in a cartoon.
Many recent books do a good job following the restrictions of the current trends and offer a clean and entertaining read, but if given the choice as a reader, I’ll take the old way. Give me adverbs, give me description, give me telling. I want to be in the same room that the characters are, to see the same people they’re looking at. Tell me a great story that I can replay 1000 times in my mind. If I want minimalism, I’ll read a map.
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Layinda’s Blog Turns One
Yesterday was the first anniversary of Layinda’s Blog. (Just for the record, I would have come up with a snappier title, but I didn’t realize when creating it that the title is the one thing in the format that can’t be changed later.) (Unless there’s something I don’t know about, which is entirely possible.)
I have nothing but good things to say about writing a blog, and can highly recommend it. Over the course of this year, I have figured out how to insert images, how to link to other sites, and how to use “keywords” effectively. I started out posting Monday through Friday, but when real life intervened, I realized that I wrote better posts if I did them as inspired, rather than on demand. I also think that writing on a regular basis has helped me to become a better and more efficient writer. In short, I’ve grown.
Thanks to EVERYONE who has visited, and special thanks to those who have left comments. If there are any particular topics anyone would like me to address in the coming year, or if there are any things I already do that you’d like to see more of, feel free to mention that in today’s comments, and I will do my best.
At the end of 2010, WordPress sent out each blog’s statistics for the year, and I thought I’d share a few of mine (below). I suspect that they give all the new blogs a “wow” rating, but I never look a gift horse in the mouth. (Hmmm, just thought of a new idea for a post…)
Thanks again, everybody, for making Layinda’s Blog such a pleasure to produce. I couldn’t have done it without you. 🙂
Here are the stats:
Happy New Year from WordPress.com! To kick off the year, we’d like to share with you data on how your blog has been doing. Here’s a high level summary of your overall blog health:
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We think you did great!
Crunchy numbers
In 2010, you wrote 133 new posts, not bad for the first year! You uploaded 7pictures, taking up a total of 7mb.
Your busiest day of the year was June 1st with76 views. The most popular post that day wasGreat Guy, Great Book, Great Advice: Part 1.
Where did they come from?
The top referring sites in 2010 were twitter.com,facebook.com, blogger.com,jemifraser.blogspot.com, andcatwoods.wordpress.com.
Some visitors came searching, mostly forsmiling hurts, books for young advanced readers, blogs for parents of advanced readers, age appropriate book lists, and ty roth author.
Attractions in 2010
These are the posts and pages that got the most views in 2010. You can see all of the year’s most-viewed posts and pages in your Site Stats.
Great Guy, Great Book, Great Advice: Part 1April 2010
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Young Advanced Readers: An Age Appropriate Book List for Puzzled ParentsApril 2010
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Ghost from the Past: Elements of the Modern NovelMay 2010
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Oldies but Goodies – Great Books for Eighth Graders
It’s time for another Oldies but Goodies, this time for eighth graders. As usual, click on the title to be transported to Amazon.com, where you can see the description and reviews. Then check out the Reader Resources in the column to the right of this post, garage sales and the library, because that’s mostly where you’re going to find them.
It’s worth the hunt – these are great books that will stay with a reader for life.
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The Girl of the Sea of Cortez
by Peter Benchley
(Yes, he wrote Jaws, but this is a completely different read.)
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Light a Single Candle
by Beverly Butler
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Rifles for Watie
by Harold Keith
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Polly Kent Rides West in the Days of ’49
by Robert McCulloch
(Read my review on Amazon)
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Duffy’s Rocks
by Edward Fenton
(I HATE the new cover!)
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A Gift of Magic
by Lois Duncan
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The Grey King
by Susan Cooper
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Ruffles and Drums
by Betty Cavanna
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Johnny Tremain
by Esther Forbes
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Cress Delahanty
by Jessamyn West
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Jack and Jill
by Louisa May Alcott
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The Lord of the Rings
by J.R.R. Tolkein
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The Story Girl
by L.M. Montgomery
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