Monthly Archives: January 2011

Contests Abound

It seems that lately, all kinds of contests for aspiring writers are popping up. Here are the links to three that I just found out about today:

• Former agent Nathan Bransford’s 4th Annual Stupendously Ultimate First Paragraph Challenge.
First Prize: A partial read by his agent, Catherine Drayton of Inkwell Management.
(Contest closes on Thursday at 4pm Pacific Time)

Fiction Groupie Blog contest.
Prize: A query critique by Anita Mumm of Nelson Literary
(To be eligible, you need to comment on both Wednesday’s and Friday’s posts).

DearEditor.com giveaway, by the author of Writing Young Adult Fiction for Dummies.
Prize: a free YA/MG edit.
(Deadline, Jan. 31st)

Good Luck!

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A Picture is Worth 1000 Words

Pope Joan: A Novel

 

I read a good book over the holidays, Pope Joan, by Donna Woolfolk Cross. My book group read it a few years ago, but I was busy at the time and only read the first few pages. I could tell it would be interesting, and always intended to get back to it, but it’s rather thick and I never seemed to have enough spare time to do it justice. This year, when winter vacation arrived, I made a point of getting it from the library.

Now, I’m not one of those writers who complains that they can no longer read a book without critiquing it. In fact, even when I pick up a book with that intent, I am so easily sucked into a story that I forget to notice anything at all unless something is poorly phrased, or there’s a typo. This time, though, after about 250 pages, I became aware of how tiny the type was. Knowing that most books these days, even historical fiction, don’t exceed 125,000 words, I started to wonder when it had been published, and stopped reading long enough to find out. 1996. I then realized why I was enjoying it so much: it had been written before the kill the adverbs/show vs. tell revolution.

Devoid of all signs of the current wisdom on how to write, there was description, and there were adverbs, adjectives and gerunds. There were words other than “said” used as dialogue tags, and it was a behemoth, over 400 pages long, even set in eight-point-type. The point of view moved like quicksilver between the characters, and there was telling mixed with showing. There was even… a cliché.

Many writers have come to think that describing a location or what characters look like robs the reader of the joy of imagining it for themselves, but I disagree. As a former graphic artist, I have a seriously visual imagination. Filling in the blanks doesn’t squelch that, it only serves as a framework for me to build upon. The mention that a character’s eyebrows are bushy doesn’t lock me into a specific image. There are a hundred ways to picture bushy brows, but if I don’t know they are bushy in the first place, I have lost my connection to the author’s vision.

There is an animated children’s show called Caillou, that depicts the action in vignettes floating on whitespace. The viewer doesn’t imagine what might be there instead, there is just nothing. I find it disconcerting, and am more distracted by how the detail stops than I would be if the artists had just added background to the picture.

When an author uses description and flushes out the nuances with adverbs and dialogue tags, it gives their story dimension, adding depth to the world that readers build in their minds. The reader becomes a part of the action, rather than seeing it as frames in a cartoon.

Many recent books do a good job following the restrictions of the current trends and offer a clean and entertaining read, but if given the choice as a reader, I’ll take the old way. Give me adverbs, give me description, give me telling. I want to be in the same room that the characters are, to see the same people they’re looking at. Tell me a great story that I can replay 1000 times in my mind. If I want minimalism, I’ll read a map.

Caillou: Boxed Set (Backpack Series)

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Layinda’s Blog Turns One

Yesterday was the first anniversary of Layinda’s Blog. (Just for the record, I would have come up with a snappier title, but I didn’t realize when creating it that the title is the one thing in the format that can’t be changed later.) (Unless there’s something I don’t know about, which is entirely possible.)

I have nothing but good things to say about writing a blog, and can highly recommend it. Over the course of this year, I have figured out how to insert images, how to link to other sites, and how to use “keywords” effectively. I started out posting Monday through Friday, but when real life intervened, I realized that I wrote better posts if I did them as inspired, rather than on demand. I also think that writing on a regular basis has helped me to become a better and more efficient writer. In short, I’ve grown.

Thanks to EVERYONE who has visited, and special thanks to those who have left comments. If there are any particular topics anyone would like me to address in the coming year, or if there are any things I already do that you’d like to see more of, feel free to mention that in today’s comments, and I will do my best.

At the end of 2010, WordPress sent out each blog’s statistics for the year, and I thought I’d share a few of mine (below). I suspect that they give all the new blogs a “wow” rating, but I never look a gift horse in the mouth. (Hmmm, just thought of a new idea for a post…)

Thanks again, everybody, for making Layinda’s Blog such a pleasure to produce. I couldn’t have done it without you. 🙂

Here are the stats:

Happy New Year from WordPress.com! To kick off the year, we’d like to share with you data on how your blog has been doing. Here’s a high level summary of your overall blog health:

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We think you did great!

Crunchy numbers

A Boeing 747-400 passenger jet can hold 416 passengers. This blog was viewed about 3,900 times in 2010. That’s about 9 full 747s.
(Author’s Note: The official anniversary number was 3997 – I’d hoped it would hit 4000 in time for the big day, but that was close enough for me! 😉 )

In 2010, you wrote 133 new posts, not bad for the first year! You uploaded 7pictures, taking up a total of 7mb.

Your busiest day of the year was June 1st with76 views. The most popular post that day wasGreat Guy, Great Book, Great Advice: Part 1.

Where did they come from?

The top referring sites in 2010 were twitter.com,facebook.comblogger.com,jemifraser.blogspot.com, andcatwoods.wordpress.com.

Some visitors came searching, mostly forsmiling hurtsbooks for young advanced readersblogs for parents of advanced readersage appropriate book lists, and ty roth author.

Attractions in 2010

These are the posts and pages that got the most views in 2010. You can see all of the year’s most-viewed posts and pages in your Site Stats.

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Great Guy, Great Book, Great Advice: Part 1April 2010
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Young Advanced Readers: An Age Appropriate Book List for Puzzled ParentsApril 2010
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Ghost from the Past: Elements of the Modern NovelMay 2010
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To Critique or Not to CritiqueApril 2010
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Nancy Who? *

Nancy Drew 01: The Secret of the Old Clock

When I was in fifth grade, I loved Nancy Drew. She was the classic upper-middle-grade-girl heroine: high-school-aged, pretty and smart, with deductive powers that rivaled Sherlock Holmes. The fact that she had not one, but two, best friends, a handsome college-age boyfriend, and drove her own car didn’t hurt, either. I wanted to be Nancy Drew when I got older.

Needless to say, that didn’t come to pass. What did come to pass was that my beloved grandmother saw an ad for a subscription to the Nancy Drew Book Club and signed me up to receive two lavender colored double-volume hardbacks of classic Nancy Drew stories, once a month. I was in heaven, ensconced in the backseat with George Fayne and Bess Marvin as Nancy navigated mystery after mystery in her blue convertible. Although I eventually wised-up to the formulaic style and started to wish that Ned Nickerson would at least hold Nancy’s hand, I enjoyed the series well into middle school.

In seventh grade, whether because the special printing abruptly ended its run, or the company decided that twelve- to thirteen-year-old girls would no longer be interested in G-rated fare, the books were unexpectedly replaced with single volumes by an author I’d never even heard of, Betty Cavanna.

After working my way through the five stages of grief, I eyed the first installment with suspicion. A nice looking hardback, it had a montage of blue-green and pink images that included a prim looking Asian teenager, Jenny Kimura. Feeling slightly disloyal, I opened it up and started to read.

Wow! I had never read a book like that before. This teenaged girl was much more complex than Nancy or her friends, with internal thoughts and an active interest in boys. She was emotional, and had problems just like any other teenager. Jenny’s mother was Japanese, but her father wasn’t, and her maternal grandparents had never accepted the marriage. Jenny didn’t even know them, but for some reason, they invited her to spend the summer there. It was my first taste of YA.

When the next book arrived, I shamelessly devoured it. Then came Mystery of the Emerald Buddha, Mystery on Safari, Ruffles and Drums, Spice Island Mystery, and others. I followed teen protagonists to Brazil, Africa, Thailand, New York City, and Revolutionary War era Concord. Their boyfriends held hands with them — and kissed them, too — as the girls considered career choices, resolved interpersonal issues, and came to mature decisions that usually involved self-denial of some sort. All of the books involved romance, but they were really about coming-of-age moments and seeing past the world’s prejudices to find what truly matters.

Occasionally, I thought it odd that Grandma was sponsoring these (innocently) romantic adventure stories, but it wasn’t until the books stopped coming that I found out she just hadn’t noticed the switch when paying the bills. Born in the days of the Gibson Girl, she told me that she didn’t think the new books were appropriate for someone my age to read.

Fortunately, they didn’t mind at the library…

These days, the Nancy Drew series is still in print, but Betty Cavanna’s books are only obtainable through other sellers on Amazon, and most are former library copies (which means you won’t be finding them there, either). But, if you know a middle-school girl who finds the current YA fodder a little too intense, it’s worth the search.

5 Titles by Betty Cavanna (Spice Island Mystery, Mystery at Love's Creek, Mystery on Safari, Mystery of the Emerald Buddha, Jenny Kimura) 5 book set

* My apologies to subscribers – I accidentally hit the “publish” button rather than the “save draft” button (an irrevocable action) before I was finished writing this post. What you received in your email notification was that version, not the final seen here. 😦

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Resolving to be Resolute

New Year’s resolutions are highly controversial. Some people love to make them, while others avoid them like the swine flu.

I’ve heard that having specific goals helps one to actually keep them. “I will lose ten pounds” is better than “I need to lose some weight.” Writing them down is supposed to help, too. And you can’t expect success if you make resolutions that involve things beyond your control, like,“I will get published this year.” (Unless, of course, your plan is to self publish.)

I usually resolve to do a few things that I’m likely to do anyway, but am largely unaware of my success or failure because I tend to forget about them. This year, I’m writing them down, from easiest to hardest:

1. I resolve to exercise more. There, I just did a sit-up. Mission accomplished.

2. I resolve to turn off TweetDeck while I write to limit distractions and maximize output.

3. I resolve to write for at least 30 minutes every day whether I feel like it or not.

I’ll let you know.

Have a happy New Year, and I hope all of your resolutions come true.

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