Monthly Archives: June 2010

Where the Boys Are

Ty Roth wrote a blog post yesterday about the lack of YA “boy books” and male authors who write them. I started to write a comment, but it got so long that I’ve turned it into a post.

There was a time when a lot of books for boys were being published. I know this, because when I was young, my big brother’s room was closer than the local library and I was lazy, so I used to raid his bookcase.  I was rewarded with finds like My Side of the Mountain, Gull Number 737, The Mad Scientists Club, and a lot of other good “boy books” that were popular those days.

At school, the books we had to read were also “boy books” (Shane, The Call of the Wild, Johnny Tremain, etc.). When we girls complained, the teachers would say it was because girls would read “boy books” but boys didn’t like “girl books.” I knew this to be true from personal experience, and when the trend continued in high school with A Separate Peace, The Great Gatsby and The Old Man and the Sea, I didn’t think too much about it. The books were good, and if I needed a “girl book” fix, I could just go to the library.

Times have changed. My going-into-sixth-grade son has had to read Caddie Woodlawn, Sarah Plain and Tall, Alice in Wonderland, and a host of other “girl books” at school. Consequently, he has become so turned off by what he perceives as fiction that I’ve had to bribe him with computer time to get him to read it at all. When I take him to the library, there are virtually no good modern “boy books,” and all but the classics have been sold off at library sales, so he’s been borrowing Jules Verne.

I’ve had the gut feeling that if he just read the right book, he would see that reading can be fun as well as informative. After a lot of thought, and one failed attempt with From the Mixed-Up Files of Mrs. Basil E. Frankweiler (another “girl book”), I have finally hooked him with one of the titles from my brother’s bookcase, The Wonderful Flight to the Mushroom Planet. He read it on his own, and actually asked me if I would buy the sequel for him.

I suspect that the well-meaning movement to empower girls in the 1980’s and 90’s spawned an inadvertent backlash against boy titles as the girls of my generation became agents, editors and teachers. It’s nice that girls are able to read things in school now that interest them, but the boys should at least be able to find something that they like at the library.

Gull Number 737My Side of the Mountain

The Mad Scientists' Club (Mad Scientist Club)Wonderful Flight To the Mushroom Planet

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Hold the Pickles, Hold the Lettuce…

Fast food restaurants are famous for doing market research to pinpoint their customers’ needs, but what teen consumers are looking for in a novel is sometimes obscured by assumptions on the part of Young Adult writers.

Most authors know that teenagers like to read books about kids who are a few years older than themselves, and that girls will read “boy books,” but boys don’t usually like to read “girl books” (at least in public). Beyond that, many writers seem to think that if their protagonist is a young adult, the manuscript qualifies as YA.

In fact, there are numerous aspects to consider when penning a developmentally appropriate novel. Teens usually enjoy works in which they can identify with the protagonist, but in situations that are out of the ordinary. They like to see how a character tackles a problem, and then reflect on what they might have done in a similar situation. Coming-of-age stories are always popular, as are stories where teens somehow best the adults, or prove themselves through adversity, or fight and win an underdog cause, or find out that something they’d been led to believe isn’t true. Good vs. evil and the suspense of a character making the “right” choice instead of the “wrong” one seems to hold a particular fascination.

“Young Adult” is currently defined by the American Library Association as ranging in age from 10-25. Many writers informally classify their work as “Young YA” or “Mature YA,” because of the disparity in emotional development within that age group.* Ignoring this aspect of the genre can actually be detrimental to the reader. One of my sisters, a pediatric nurse, recently attended a lecture given by a psychologist who said it is not uncommon for teens to experience intense anxiety and other problems because of reading material that they aren’t emotionally ready for.**

There’s a lot to think about when authoring content for that diverse group, and writers need to make sure that their product is suitable for the target market. Fast food chains are coming under fire for providing what kids want at the expense of what is healthful. No one expects them to serve broccoli, but with a little creativity, they should be able to come up with something nourishing that also satisfies the palate.

*See my previous post, “Considering Asychronous Development in Book Selection.”

**Victoria Mixon just blogged about this topic on June 15th, and it’s worth a read.

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Oldies but Goodies: Great Books for High School Students

It’s been awhile since I’ve posted an Oldies but Goodies, so here’s one for high school students.

Several of these books are required reading, but it’s surprising how much more enjoyable they are when just read for fun. Most are available at libraries and Amazon.com, some are even on Kindle, all are good. One of them might not be equally enjoyed by both sexes, but frankly, my dear, I don’t give a damn. 😉

A Separate Peace
by John Knowles

A Separate Peace

A Walk Across America
by Peter Jenkins

A Walk Across America

Fahrenheit 451
by Ray Bradbury

Fahrenheit 451

The Three Musketeers
by Alexandre Dumas

The Three Musketeers (Wordsworth Classics)

Gone With the Wind
by Margaret Mitchell

Gone with the Wind

The Great Gatsby
by F. Scott Fitzgerald

The Great Gatsby

To Kill a Mockingbird
by Harper Lee
To Kill a Mockingbird (Harper Perennial Modern Classics)

The Chronicles of Narnia Series
by C.S. Lewis
(These seem like entirely different books when read at the high school level)

Watership Down
by Richard Adams

Watership Down: A Novel

The Best Short Stories of O. Henry
Edited by Bennett Cerf

The Best Short Stories of O. Henry (Modern Library)

All Creatures Great and Small
by James Herriot

All Creatures Great and Small

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Take the Hint

I used to have a boss who felt that the universe gave him messages about his life. He was constantly saying things like, “I’ve run into three people lately who have problems with alcohol. I think that the universe is trying to tell me something.” He would then lay off drinking for a week or two, until the universe told him to do something different.

If I were him, I would think that the universe is trying to tell ME something right now.

My manuscript, Jim and Jack, was originally literary fiction, but thanks to a lot of online advice, I have reluctantly morphed it into something more commercial. Although the story is definitely more streamlined, it is no longer the relaxing summer’s day that it was, and I don’t think that it’s as good in many ways. A few things have improved, such as the action starting earlier, but overall, it sounds just like everybody else’s “voice” these days. This has bothered me so much that I’ve even stopped querying, paralyzed about which version to send if I get another request.

Until this week. My author-hero Ty Roth posted about this very topic. So did literary agent Rachelle Gardner. Victoria Mixon had a superb (and I NEVER use that word) post about young adult literature and how all of the edgy/disturbing YA stuff isn’t healthy for kids, and when I left a comment, she replied with, “Layinda, aim for your star. Forget the nay-sayers. Nobody knows what’s going to sell, only that trends are started by people with the guts to go where no one else is going. “We are the makers of manners, Kate.”—Henry V

Now, I don’t think that the universe tells anybody anything, but these posts have resonated with me, and my mind is made up. I am going back to the original version, and I will let the professionals decide whether my manuscript is any good or not. From what I understand, there are always rewrites anyway. 

If you missed any of these excellent posts, here are the links:

Ty Roth:
http://tyroth.wordpress.com/2010/06/17/the-secret-to-my-success/

Rachelle Gardner:
http://cba-ramblings.blogspot.com/2010/06/write-from-your-heart-or-follow-trends.html

Victoria Mixon: http://www.victoriamixon.com/advice/2010/06/14/honestly-or-sensationally-addressing-ya-taboos/comment-page-1/#comment-143

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Author Series – Gone but Not Forgotten: Gene Stratton-Porter

Gene Stratton-Porter was born in Lagro, Indiana on August 17, 1863. Christened Geneva Grace, she was the youngest of twelve children. When Geneva was three, her mother was taken ill with typhoid fever and never fully recovered, so the little girl spent most of her early years outdoors in the company of her father and brothers. During this time, she fed baby birds in the nest, collected moths and generally immersed herself in nature. When she was twelve her mother died, and the family spent the next several years moving between the homes of Gene’s married sisters.

Gene Age 10

In 1883, Gene met Charles D. Porter at a religious revival. Three years later, she married the successful pharmacist and the couple built a home, “Limberlost,” by the Limberlost Swamp near Geneva, Indiana. They later built another residence, “The Cabin in Wildflower Woods,” located near Rome City. (Both are now Indiana State Historic Sites.)

An early environmentalist, Gene wrote popular novels for young adults that took place in natural settings. After achieving financial success as an author, Stratton-Porter developed her own production company in Los Angeles, and most of her books were made into movies. On December 6, 1924, she died in a streetcar accident during one of her trips to California. She was fifty-one years old. After Stratton-Porter’s death, her only daughter, Jeannette Porter Meehan, wrote sequels to several of her mother’s novels.

During her lifetime, Gene Stratton-Porter wrote a total of twelve novels, the most famous of which were Freckles and A Girl of the Limberlost. She also wrote nature studies and books of poetry. It is estimated that she had a readership of fifty-million at the time that she died. Most of her titles are still in print, and are also available as free Kindle downloads from Amazon.com.

Gene Stratton-Porter: A Little Study of Her Life and Work, published by Doubleday, Page and Company in 1915 and again in 1926, is an excellent biography created largely from the author’s personal records and writings. It can be viewed online at http://digital.library.upenn.edu/women/stratton/gene/gene.html

Freckles


———-

The Keeper of the Bees (Library of Indiana Classics)


Sources:

Gene Stratton Porter State Historic Site
http://www.genestratton-porter.com/Biography.html

Wikipedia
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gene_Stratton-Porter

Lesson Tutor
http://www.lessontutor.com/eesStrattonPorter.html

Indiana State Museum
http://www.indianamuseum.org/sites/gene.html

Our Tentative Times
http://www.tentativetimes.net/porter/limber2a.html

Penn Libraries
http://digital.library.upenn.edu/women/stratton/gene/gene.html

Google Images
http://www.google.com/images?client=safari&rls=en-us&q=gene+stratton-porter&oe=UTF-8&um=1&ie=UTF-8&source=univ&ei=EkUVTJyTJcKC8gaMk5SbCg&sa=X&oi=image_result_group&ct=title&resnum=4&ved=0CD8QsAQwAw

The Literature Network
http://www.online-literature.com/stratton-porter/

Our Land, Our Literature
http://www.bsu.edu/ourlandourlit/literature/authors/portergs.htm

Gene Stratton-Porter and her Limberlost Swamp
http://www.genestrattonporter.net/

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Topping the Charts

I found myself idly wondering this morning what the most popular book of all time was. I did a Google search, and Soyouwanna.com listed the ten most popular, so I checked it out. They freely admit that their stats are only on books with available sales figures, but their list still provides a general idea of what folks have preferred. Here it is:*

10.In His Steps: What Would Jesus Do?In His Steps: “What Would Jesus Do?”
Author: Rev. Charles Monroe Sheldon
Copies sold: 28,500,000

9. Go to "Valley of the Dolls" page Valley of the Dolls
Author: Jacqueline Susann
Copies sold: 30,000,000

8. Go to "Dr. Spock's Baby and Child Care: 8th Edition" page The Common Sense Book of Baby and Child Care
Author: Dr. Benjamin Spock
Copies sold: 39,200,000

7. Thumbnail for World Almanac and... The World Almanac
Author: Who knows?
Copies sold: 40,000,000

6. Go to "A Message to Garcia: And Other Essential Writings on Success" page A Message to Garcia
Author: Elbert Hubbard
Copies sold: 40-50,000,000

5. Go to "McGuffey's Eclectic Readers/Boxed" page The McGuffey Readers
Author: William Holmes McGuffey
Copies sold: 60,000,000

4. Go to "Guinness World Records 2010: Thousands of new records in The Book of the Decade!" page The Guinness Book of Records
Author: Who knows?
Copies sold: 81,000,000

3. The American spelling book: containing the rudiments of the English language for the use of schools in the United StatesAmerican Spelling Book
Author: Noah Webster
Copies sold: 100,000,000

2. Go to "Quotations From Chairman Mao Tse-Tung" page Quotations from the Works of Mao Tse-tung
Author: Mao Tse-tung
Copies sold: 800,000,000

1. The Holy Bible King James Version: King James VersionThe Bible
Author: God
Copies sold: 6,000,000,000

What I find interesting is that only one of the books would be categorized as fiction.** Reference books, religious works, “how to” manuals and dogma all outrank the imagination for supplying a good read. That Valley of the Dolls must be some book!

*To see the complete annotation, go to their website.

**For those of you who — like me — have never heard of A Message to Garcia, it is a motivational true story.

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I Really Should Be Working…

I have posted previously about the benefits of procrastinating. It allows the subconscious to have some important incubation time, helps clear out the mental cobwebs, and diffuses inner conflict on days when writing is more of a struggle than a joy.

In the spirit of providing tools for avoiding writer’s block, I have annotated a few good, free websites that are a wonderful way to change gears while scoring some brownie points with the inner child. 

braingle.com
This site is a storehouse of brain teasers and mental challenges to delight even the most self-disciplined of writers. 

Goodhousekeeping.com
You might be happy to just read the articles on this website, but if you go to the “games” section, you will be even happier. Spliterature and Mah Jong Dimensions are two of my favorites. Note: you have to scroll to the bottom of the home page to find the correct tab.

TestQ.com
Lots of fun and informative tests to take, that range from measuring your I.Q. to determining what your favorite color says about you. This site is a pleasant way to pass the time when you really should be researching the proper way to write a query letter. 

Facebook.com
I guess I don’t really need to describe this one, but I can highly recommend the Scrabble Beta game.

Lego.com
It’s not just for kids anymore. There are many terrific games on this website (category: Play) that will engage even the mature writer. My favorite is Junkbot, where you have to guide a lego robot across a series of blocks that gets more challenging with every level.

Note: A good trick to keep the goofing-off to a manageable level is to set a timer. When the buzzer goes off, get back to work.


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Monday Author Series – Gone but Not Forgotten: Marguerite Henry

Marguerite Henry

Marguerite Breithaupt Henry was born on April 13, 1902, in Wisconsin. When she was eight years old, she fell victim to rheumatic fever and was an invalid for several years. Confined to bed, there wasn’t much to do in those days but read and write, and so that’s what she did. At age eleven, she entered one of her stories in a magazine contest and won, resulting in her first publication. After fully recuperating, she went back to school and continued on to college, where she received a degree to teach English.

After she married Sydney Crocker Henry in 1923, she started submitting some of her stories to magazines. After some success, she began to write animal books for children, collaborating with illustrator Wesley Dennis on several of her works. Their first endeavor was Justin Morgan Had a Horse, which won a Newbury Honor. Most of her books were about horses, which Dennis excelled at depicting.

Known for her extensive research and the historical accuracy of her stories, her books were very popular with children, and many are still in print. The most famous of her fifty-nine works were, Justin Morgan Had a HorseBrighty of the Grand Canyon, Misty of Chincoteague, Stormy, Misty’s Foal, King of the Wind, and Album of Horses, earning her two Newbury Honors and a Newbury Medal, as well as several other distinguished awards. 

After a long and fulfilling career, she died on November 26, 1997, at age 95.

Justin Morgan Had a Horse

Misty of Chincoteague
 
Brighty: Of the Grand Canyon (Marguerite Henry Horseshoe Library)
King of the Wind: The Story of the Godolphin Arabian
 
Album of Horses

 

Sources: 

Wikipedia.com
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marguerite_Henry

Google Images
http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://favoritechildrensbooks.info/wp-content/uploads/2008/09/margueritehenry.jpg&imgrefurl=http://favoritechildrensbooks.info/&usg=__avHwX6WTwKM6Pw-tUYWqKHa3TtQ=&h=200&w=170&sz=7&hl=en&start=3&sig2=qSPJ7gFnG712aJkF6Bofpw&um=1&itbs=1&tbnid=e2mvKDZQJN_HzM:&tbnh=104&tbnw=88&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dmarguerite%2Bhenry%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26client%3Dsafari%26sa%3DX%26rls%3Den-us%26tbs%3Disch:1&ei=hz8NTL6NIYH6lweGlJGYDg 

Greenville Public Library
http://www.yourlibrary.ws/childrens_webpage/j-author42001.html

Answers.com
http://www.answers.com/topic/marguerite-henry

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Que(ry) Sera, Sera.

Getting rejected is no fun. It’s part of the writing game, though, and so instead of complaining about it, it’s a good time to take stock.

If you are lucky enough to get a personalized rejection, you at least have some feedback to consider. Whether the agent didn’t connect with your work, or if they’re already repping a similar manuscript, you can take that for what it’s worth and continue on.

A form letter is a different animal (and don’t think that they don’t happen with partials/fulls). You have no idea why your work has been rejected, what might be wrong with it, or how to fix it. You can guess, but should you go to the trouble of rewriting, or just assume that you haven’t hit the right agent yet?

Critique partners and beta readers can be helpful, to an extent, but in the end, you are still the one who decides whether their suggestions  are good ones or not. If you are getting the same comments over and over, like, “it doesn’t flow well,” or, “your main character is unlikable,” it’s time to pay attention and do some editing. Otherwise, just keep an open mind, and keep researching agents/sending query letters.

Sooner or later, you’ll hit the jackpot, or you’ll write something better, or you’ll crawl into a literary hole and decide that maybe writing wasn’t the life for you, anyway.

However it works out, it will.

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Make Way for Goslings

This morning, I was heading East in the left hand lane of the highway when I spied two Canada Geese and their six or so goslings strutting out from the grassy median, headed for the pavement. As soon as I passed, the parents hurried their babies into the road, and my eyes were glued to the rear-view mirror to check out their fate. “Hurry up, Goosies!” I rooted.

They had a good shot at it, as there were no more cars for about a quarter mile, and that one switched lanes in time to avoid a collision. I held my breath until the family got across, happy to see them arrive at the other side. They still had an off-ramp to negotiate, but as far as I was concerned, they were safe. Directing my attention back to the road, I realized that before their trek across the eastbound lanes, the geese had already crossed one off-ramp and the two westbound lanes. 

The parents had seemed to wait for traffic to clear before heading across the highway, but I was impressed that they would take such a risk. Geese are notoriously overprotective of their offspring. Anyone who has ever come too close to a goose with goslings knows that they will hiss, bite and even chase you away if you get too close. The search for a better grazing field must have been imperative.

It occurred to me that writers basically go through all of the stages of eggdom with our manuscripts. An idea presents itself, and we incubate it with our time and creativity until a story hatches out. We nurture our fuzzy chick through the editing process until it is time to send it out into the world of querying to see if it will fly. Sometimes we are driven to make our way through the field of writing groups and critique partners to strengthen and rework our writing for the best results. With vigilance, a lot of luck and a little encouragement from our friends, we make it to the other side in one piece, hopefully wiser and with the experience needed to continue the journey.

Go, geese!

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