Monthly Archives: April 2010

Going Back Outside the Box

When I was in high school, I wrote articles for my church youth group’s newsletter. Usually I contributed silly short stories, or a report on how an activity had gone, but sometimes I promoted upcoming events. In tenth grade, I was asked to write about a retreat planned for Halloween weekend, at a nearby camp called The Highlands. 

I had been there many times, and enjoyed spending time with my friends in the cozy cabins, surrounded by essentially old growth woods and fields. Particularly beautiful in the fall, the property had been purchased for use as a camp by a group of Presbyterians in the late 1800’s.

The previous owner had been an early Ohio pioneer named Hezekiah, who had lived on the property with his wife, Martha, and their two grown sons.  A mile or so from the camp’s cabins were four graves under an old tree, their final resting place. Misfortune had stalked the family in the form of a large white dog, who had contracted rabies and attacked them all before meeting his own unhappy fate. One by one, the family succumbed, until no one was left. Legend had it that for some reason, Hezekiah’s head stone would intermittently topple over, and when that occurred, the white dog would roam again and attack unsuspecting campers. 

Inspired, I wrote a great article for the newsletter, incorporating the sad story of Hezekiah and his family, making sure to mention that Hezekiah’s headstone was in fact down again, just in time for Halloween. Mwa ha ha.

It turned out to be a very successful event. More people than usual attended, and everyone had a good time. Except for me. After relaying the details of Hezekiah’s unfortunate demise, I was too scared to go!

When I write, it is a little like being a fly on the wall of my own imagination. Last week, when I decided to provide a murder scene for the blogfest, I wasn’t sure that I really wanted to buzz into the “morbid” room again, but I did it as a personal challenge. It ended up being creepy, but fun, and I got a lot of nice comments. (Thank you, Commenters!)

The moral of the story: Take a chance and write something that you might not be perfectly comfortable with. When the retreat is over and you didn’t go, you’ll only regret it.

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Whodunnit?

Author Anne Riley is having a Murder Scene Blogfest on her blog today at annerileybooks.com/blog/. Participants are to write a murder scene and post it on their own blog, then go to Anne’s and click on the other names to get to their blogs and read theirs.

A murder scene is the last thing I’d ever write on my own, so I did it as a personal challenge to expand my comfort zone. Here it is:

Unconvinced by Tom that she was overreacting, Meredith latched the door and hauled the desk chair over to brace it under the doorknob. Carefully balancing her dinner fork on the knob, she was confident that if anyone tried to enter, it would fall onto the metal seat and wake her up in time to call for help on her cell. She picked up her phone and punched in Tom’s number so that she would only have to hit the green button, and set it next to her pillow.

Feeling calmer with a plan in place, she went into the bathroom to get ready for bed. She felt herself relax as she brushed her teeth, letting the water run out of the tap at full force, a remnant of her childhood rebellion against Nanny’s constant criticisms. As she rinsed the brush, the sleeve of her flannel nightgown slipped down her wrist and was quickly saturated. Distracted, she grabbed a hand towel from the rack and squeezed it around the heavy fabric.

She glanced into the mirror and was shocked to see Roald standing behind her with a pair of black gloves on. Meredith whirled around, panicked. Her phone was on the bed, and no one would hear her screams inside the bathroom.

“Thought you were pretty clever with the chair, didn’t you?” her brother asked quietly. “Too bad that you didn’t hear it, anyway, with the water running like that. What would Nanny say?” He leaned past her to shut it off.

She shot around him, hoping that he wasn’t expecting it, but the long nightgown ensnared her legs and he caught her easily. Quickly pinning her to the floor, he grasped her neck in a terrifying chokehold and started to squeeze. She tried to scream, but was more of a strangled gurgle as he shook her and she fell back, limp. He released her and stood, widthdrawing a lighter from his pocket. He lit the candle that was perched on the back of the toilet, then leaned down and lifted the hem of her gown, passing the flame under it until it caught fire. He dropped the pink ruffle, and threw some towels on top of her for good measure.

“We’ll see who laughs last,” he remarked to her still form, slipping the lighter back into his pocket. He was stealthy as he left her suite, looking up and down the hall before moving quickly to his own room, unnoticed.

Smoke curls were wafting from the crack under her door by the time the alarm went off. The guests came out of their rooms in various states of undress, quickly herding downstairs and outside onto the manor lawn. Fire engines could be heard in the distance.

“Where is Meredith?” asked Tom in a panic. Everyone looked around, but she was not among them. “I’m going back in!”

Roald held him back, saying, “No – it’s too dangerous. You have the children to think of – I’ll go.”

Before Tom could protest, Roald had dashed back into the house and up the stairs. Throwing open the door to Meredith’s room, the fresh air fed the flames and the room became an inferno.  Shielding himself with a blanket, he charged into the bathroom and swept her charred body into his arms.

The others rushed over as he carried her out the front door. He laid her body on the grass. “I was too late. It must have started in her room.”

Tom sank to the ground next to his fiancée. “No!” he cried, anguished. He grasped her shoulders and pulled her to him, sobbing. The fire engines pulled up and a paramedic ran over with his bag. He pressed a hand against her neck. “She’s dead,” he confirmed.

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Special Post on Saturday

Normally I would be posting on Friday, and then not again until Monday, but this week I am participating in a Blog Fest where individuals are to write a murder scene, post it on their own blog on Saturday, and then travel to everyone else’s blog to read theirs. It sounded like a challenge, because I have never written a murder scene before, and so I decided to sign up for it.

If you are interested in reading a scene that I would never normally write, come back tomorrow. 🙂

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Pigeonholing Your Manuscript (or) Helpful Hints for Genre ID

My mother’s aunt was a rather well-known artist, Nell Walker Warner. Although she started out her career in Hollywood, painting backdrops for silent movies, in the 1920’s and 30’s she became part of a school of painters known as the California Impressionists. She was known primarily for her floral still lifes and seascapes, but I know her work best by the family portraits that still hang in my parents’ home.

A few years back, a cousin discovered that Auntie Nell’s paintings had gone up in value, and scoured the internet to discern the worth of paintings still held by the family. In addition to the portraits, various relatives retain a variety of florals, a seascape, a watercolor of Venice and a small view of a path with mountains behind it. Much to his dismay, he found that while the florals and seascape were worth notice, the others were considerably less valuable because their subjects were not what the artist was known for. Same artist, same quality, some even larger in size (with art, bigger is frequently better), but not the right genre.

Genre is an interesting animal, hard to define, typically trendy, and sometimes elusive. It is a classification used primarily to drive book sales, to direct a potential buyer to the right area of the bookstore, which makes it more likely to be found and purchased. It also serves as a publishing gatekeeper to ensure that saturation levels are identified, so as not to clog the market. Chick Lit, for example, is “full” these days, unless the manuscript is a knockout. 

These classifications are great, as long as one has written something clearly identifiable. To the person behind the keyboard, genre is frequently of secondary interest. Many writers (myself included) have written entire novels without considering genre until query letter time. As a result, the typical manuscript is a blend of genres, and the typical author is confused about what to call it.

Amazon.com currently lists their book categories as: Nonfiction, Professional & Technical, Children’s Books, Literature & Fiction, Reference, Entertainment, Computers & Internet, Arts & Photography, History, Science, Business & Investing, Science Fiction & Fantasy, Mystery & Thrillers, Religion & Spirituality, Biographies & Memoirs, Romance, Gay & Lesbian, Health, Mind & Body, Teens, Comics & Graphic Novels, Travel, Cooking, Food & Wine, Medicine, Sports, Outdoors & Nature, Home & Garden, Law, and Parenting & Families.

That’s a start, but what about Urban Fantasy, Cosy Mystery, Amish Romance, and the rest of those offshoots that agents (and editors) seem to care so much about? In an effort to end the confusion, I have scoured the internet for articles on identifying genre. Here are some of the best:

Agent Query:
http://agentquery.com/genre_descriptions.aspx

Writing to Publish:
http://www.cuebon.com/ewriters/genres.html

Jill Terry:
wordsmithextraordinaire.wordpress.com/2006/12/13/literary-genres/

Nathan Bransford:
http://blog.nathanbransford.com/2008/10/commercial-fiction.html

And two that I just found this morning, thanks to Elizabeth Craig and her wonderful Twitter posts (it must be Unofficial Genre Day):

Stephanie L. McGee:
http://novicewriterchronicles.blogspot.com/2010/04/genre-adventure.html

Katie Lovett:
http://katie-lovett.com/2010/03/15/blending-genres/

With the help of these experts, your YA-Historical-Adventure-Literary Fiction-Romance-Family Saga will soon be folded neatly into an acceptable (and hopefully marketable) literary classification. Good luck!

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Recommended Authors by Grade Level

Having written a number of longish posts lately, I’m breaking things up a bit with a short list of authors who should not be overlooked when selecting reading materials for the younger crowd:

Preschool:
Margaret Wise Brown/Eric Carle

Kindergarten:
Dr. Seuss/P.D. Eastman

First Grade:
Michael Bond/Virginia Lee Burton

Second Grade:
Laura Ingalls Wilder/Beverly Cleary

Third Grade:
Marguerite Henry/Catherine Woolley

Fourth Grade:
John D. Fitzgerald/Sid Fleischman

Fifth Grade:
Elizabeth Enright/E.L. Konigsburg

Sixth Grade:
C.S. Lewis/Eleanor Cameron/Elizabeth George Speare

Seventh Grade:
Jean Craighead George/Madeleine L’Engle

Eighth Grade:
J.R.R. Tolkien/Betty Cavanna

Ninth Grade:
F. Scott Fitzgerald/Margaret Mitchell

Tenth Grade:
James Thurber/Harper Lee

Eleventh Grade:
Alexander Dumas/Ray Bradbury

Twelfth Grade:
Richard Adams/C.S. Lewis (Yes, again.)

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Scrabbling for Success: 10 Helpful Hints for the Querying Process

Ever since I discovered that Scrabble was on Facebook, I have been playing simultaneous games with multiple people. In an attempt to justify this, I have decided to write a post about things that I have noticed are parallels between the game of Scrabble and the Querying Process.

1. LOOK AT THINGS FROM EVERY ANGLE

Look at the board’s potential in various ways before setting any letters down, even before you look at your own tiles. Sometimes, just adding an ‘S’ can net you more points than making a word out of the letters on your rack.

When writing a query letter, it is important to think of a good hook. While there are typically many aspects of a manuscript that could be highlighted, jot down several different ideas before selecting one to develop. Sometimes, not going with the obvious can be more effective.

2. TAKE YOUR TIME

It pays to take some time to consider the potential point value of different words, instead of just going with the first thing you see.

Rather than whipping your query together just to have something to send out, it is better to take your time with it, get some opinions, and send out a few test queries to agents on your B list first. If you find that no one responds, give it a few tweaks and send out a few more. Remember, you can never requery an agent with the same project; don’t burn bridges in your haste to get on the bestseller list.

3. DON’T BE AFRAID TO TAKE A FEW RISKS

Sometimes you’re not sure if a word is really a word or not, but when you take a chance, it can pay off in big points. One of my recent words was QUIPU, which I recalled from my sixth grade Social Studies report on the Incas. I wasn’t sure whether or not it would be valid, but I tried it anyway. 66 points!

A few months ago, I queried an agent whose website said if there was no response in one week, to requery. A week later, I had not received a reply. Although I felt awkward about it, I re-sent the query with a note reminding the agent that queriers were instructed to do so, and apologized for it being a duplicate. Within a few hours, the agent responded that he had never seen it, and requested a partial.

4. CREATE A CHALLENGE AND THEN REWARD YOURSELF

It can be dull playing against people who don’t play as well as you do, or are of the same skill level. Mix things up by playing people who are better than you are. If you win, take a little time to gloat. This can be done subtly on Facebook by “sharing” the news and personalizing it by saying, “Good game, (opponent’s name here).”

Researching agents can be tiresome, as can tweaking/personalizing each query, and you should reward yourself often. Set up a system where after researching/sending three, you get a treat. The treat doesn’t have to be big, just something you like (going for a walk, getting a snack, or playing a game of Scrabble on Facebook…). After ten are totaled, you get something bigger, while a request for a partial or full manuscript gets a correspondingly larger payoff.

5. DON’T SET YOURSELF UP TO FAIL

Don’t play someone better than yourself too often. Sometimes it’s fun to face a difficult challenge, but it isn’t fun to get beaten all the time, and you won’t want to play anymore if it happens a lot.

Don’t make unlikely goals to inspire yourself (sending ten queries in one day, getting a response in the first five queries, getting an agent in 20 queries, etc.), because if you fail, you will be less likely to try it again. Managable chunks are best. 

6. DON’T RELY ON THE SAME PERSON ALL THE TIME

Don’t always play the same opponent. Playing with a variety of people keeps you from getting into a rut, and you tend to learn a better variety of strategies.

Find different people to critique your query and make suggestions. You will be sending the query to many agents, with different points of view. The more people the basic query appeals to, the better off you’ll be.

7. CAPITALIZE ON NEW IDEAS AND TECHNIQUES

Learn from your opponents; watch what they do better and take heed. They might not be prepared to have their own tricks used against them.

Look for query critiques on agents’ blogs. Even if your query isn’t the one being evaluated, you can learn a lot from other people’s mistakes.

8. FORGIVE YOURSELF FOR THINGS BEYOND YOUR CONTROL

Sometimes you just don’t get great letters on your rack. Persevere, and sooner or later things will turn around.

Consider the comments on your rejection letters. If it’s just not “right for their list” or not what they rep, or if they just signed a similar book, don’t take it personally.

9. DON’T GIVE UP

Even if your opponent is 80 points ahead, keep on playing. You may end up losing anyway, but you certainly will if you just forfeit.

Even though it can be discouraging to get rejection after rejection, it is all part of the querying game. Keep reminding yourself of authors who got over a hundred rejection letters before finding representation, such as J.K. Rowling, and that was when it was a lot easier to get published.

10. DON’T BE AFRAID TO DO SOMETHING DIFFERENT

You might have the word “indigo” in your tray, but if the letters on the board don’t give you an opening, it doesn’t matter how great your plans are. If you look into alternatives, you might get something even better.

Don’t just query. Participate in online agent pitch fests, go to conferences, enter contests. There are many ways to get your work seen by agents. Take advantage of as many as possible. Not only will it get your work out there, but it is fun and breaks up the monotony of querying. 

I could go on, but it’s my turn…

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National Poetry Month

When I turned six, my aunt gave me my first book of poetry, The Big Golden Book of Poetry: 85 Childhood Favorites, edited by Jane Werner, illustrated by Gertrude Elliot. Aside from the extremely intriguing cover, the poems were all good, and my love of poetry was born. Some years later, in 1996, the Academy of American Poets established April as National Poetry Month. In honor of that much maligned but noble art, I am posting a few of my favorites:

a

First Fig

My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends–
It gives a lovely light!

– Edna St. Vincent Millay
(The first woman to be awarded the Pulitzer Prize for poetry.)

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Now We Are Six

When I was one
I had just begun
When I was two
I was nearly new
When I was three
I was hardly me
When I was four
I was not much more
When I was five
I was just alive
But now I am six,
I’m as clever as clever;
so I think I’ll be six now
for ever and ever

– A.A. Milne

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Mud

Mud is very nice to feel
All squishy-squashy between the toes.
I’d rather wade in wiggly mud,
Then smell a yellow rose.

Nobody else but the rosebud knows
How nice mud feels
Between the toes.

– Polly Chase Boyden

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Calendar

January shivers,
February shines,
March blows off the winter ice,
April makes the morning nice, 
May is hopscotch lines.
June is deep blue swimming,
Picnics in July,
August is my birthday,
September whistles by.
October is for roller skates,
November is the fireplace,
December is the best because of sleds, and snow, and Santa Claus. 

– Myra Cohn Livingston

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The Owl and the Pussycat 

I
The Owl and the Pussy-cat went to sea
In a beautiful pea green boat,
They took some honey, and plenty of money,
Wrapped up in a five pound note.
The Owl looked up to the stars above,
And sang to a small guitar,
‘O lovely Pussy! O Pussy my love,
What a beautiful Pussy you are,
You are,
You are!
What a beautiful Pussy you are!’

II
Pussy said to the Owl, ‘You elegant fowl!
How charmingly sweet you sing!
O let us be married! too long we have tarried:
But what shall we do for a ring?’
They sailed away, for a year and a day,
To the land where the Bong-tree grows
And there in a wood a Piggy-wig stood
With a ring at the end of his nose,
His nose,
His nose,
With a ring at the end of his nose.

III
‘Dear pig, are you willing to sell for one shilling
Your ring?’ Said the Piggy, ‘I will.’
So they took it away, and were married next day
By the Turkey who lives on the hill.
They dined on mince, and slices of quince,
Which they ate with a runcible spoon;
And hand in hand, on the edge of the sand,
They danced by the light of the moon,
The moon,
The moon,
They danced by the light of the moon.

– Edward Lear

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Monday’s Child

Monday’s child is fair of face,
Tuesday’s child is full of grace;
Wednesday’s child is full of woe,
Thursday’s child has far to go;
Friday’s child is loving and giving,
Saturday’s child works hard for its living;
But the child that is born on the Sabbath day
Is bonny and blithe, and good and gay.

– Mother Goose

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A Flea and a Fly in a Flue

A flea and a fly in a flue,

were imprisoned, so what could they do?

Said the fly, “Let us flee!”

“Let us fly!” said the flea,

So they flew through a flaw in the flue.

– Ogden Nash

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Untitled Haiku

Temple bells die out.
The fragrant blossoms remain.
A perfect evening!

– Basho

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Great Minds Think Alike

Most creative ideas are developed by individuals. There are occasional collaborative efforts, but most of the time people end up disagreeing and going their own way. By and large, if you are creative, you spend quite a bit of time alone.

Most of my pastimes are individual in nature. I like to write, read, paint/draw, knit/crochet, bake, play the piano, make things out of stained glass, and do genealogical research.  On the Myer’s Briggs test, (www.myersbriggs.org) I score E/INFJ, which means I am right on the border of being an introvert/extrovert. In short, my extroverted side tends to suffer from my interest in solitary pursuits.

It seems to me that many writers are in the same boat. This problem is traditionally solved by drinking, but with the advent of the internet, things have changed somewhat. I have been a member of the Agent Query Connect writing forum since last August. My online friends are cheerful, knowledgeable, helpful and creative, with a good sense of humor. They like to have fun, sometimes disagree, and occasionally gripe, but by and large, the thing they have in common is that they are a lot like me: Word people who spend a lot of time alone.

Although I have heard some horror stories about internet trolls and the like, my experience of a writing forum has been very positive, for several reasons. First of all, the other people on the forum are writers. When I ask for opinions about my work, they tell me, unlike friends who might read and say inanely, “It was really good.” (Whether it was, or not.) Secondly, there is a ton of positive support. If I get an offer for a partial/full OR have been laid low by rejection, there will be sincere condolences and/or good wishes from that empathetic bunch. Thirdly, I get a decent laugh at least once a day.

The word “forum” is defined (in part) by the New Oxford American Dictionary as:

forum |ˈfôrəm|

noun ( pl. forums )

1 a place, meeting, or medium where ideas and views on a particular issue can be exchanged : it will be a forum for consumers to exchange their views on medical research.

2 a court or tribunal.

3 ( pl. fora |ˈfôrə|) (in an ancient Roman city) a public square or marketplace used for judicial and other business.

That does not seem like an adequate description of what goes on in a writing forum. I think that I would use the word “cohort.” (Which doesn’t sound too warm and fuzzy either, but what does it mean?) The same dictionary defines it as:

cohort |ˈkōˌhôrt|

noun

1 [treated as sing. or pl. ] an ancient Roman military unit, comprising six centuries, equal to one tenth of a legion.

2 [treated as sing. or pl. ] a group of people banded together or treated as a group : a cohort of civil servants patiently drafting legislation.

• a group of people with a common statistical characteristic : the 1940–44 birth cohort of women.

3 a supporter or companion.

• an accomplice or conspirator : his three cohorts each had pled guilty.

ORIGIN late Middle English : from Old French cohorte, or from Latin cohors, cohort- ‘yard, retinue.’ Compare with court .

 The word derives from the Latin : cohors, an ancient Roman military unit, and also ‘band of people with a common interest.’ 

I think that number three describes it the best. Companions with a common characteristic, all in the same straights, supporting, empathizing and encouraging. If you are a writer, join a writing cohort (either online, or locate one in your community). You will be surprised at how much more connected you feel.

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